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Re:Path of LOVE 14 years 7 months ago #13086

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Thanks for your compliment, Jamie. Please call me my nickname; A.If I was Shinhye in your story, It 's difficult for her to choose geun suk or hyung joon. Oh! eager to see what next chapter you will write .
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Re:Path of LOVE 14 years 7 months ago #13088

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g221144 wrote:
Thanks for your compliment, Jamie. Please call me my nickname; A.If I was Shinhye in your story, It 's difficult for her to choose geun suk or hyung joon. Oh! eager to see what next chapter you will write .


okay..

nice to meet you A..=)

thanks for reading.
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Re:Path of LOVE 14 years 7 months ago #13093

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Thanks for the update sis...

:)

Love it when GS try not to add more problem to SH...
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Re:Path of LOVE 14 years 7 months ago #13101

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hi jaymie,

thanks for the update....

this chapter is really awesome......i loved not just a line but a paragraph...hehe and hurray for GS this time

‘Shin Hye is not a trophy so stop this already” geun suk said then He turned back again.

“Are you a man? Not accepting a challenge?” Hyung joon mocked

It’s like his blood goes up to his head when he heard it. He turned back and walks towards Hyung joon.

“You!” Geun Suk said while pointing his finger to Hyung joon’s chest

“never say MAN in front of me, because you don’t know what it means” Geun Suk said

“what?” Hyung Joon asked

“ a real Man knows that he can make a girl cry, but will never ever try” Geun Suk said


‘now, tell me, between us, who’s the real man?” Geun Suk asked

Hyung Joon didn’t answer him. Then Geun Suk smirked and walks away from him.


my jaw dropped while reading this part really.... ;)

till the next one :)

p.s
it's okay katy..

i'm so touched that you spent your time commenting on every chapters..

thanks so much..

don't forget to take a rest.. don't make yourself too tired..

thanks again.

hugs.hugs


thanks so much too for the concern...ill take note of that... but ill tell u this no problem about it because ur FF is also a SPAZZ worthy one....i cant resist but to comment...haha just keep it up jaymie ;)
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Re:Path of LOVE 14 years 7 months ago #13132

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ne ne jaymie-chan, i've jst read ur latest chp n im :) :P loving it!!
ur choice of words are very nicely done frm beginning to end esp on MY and KS's part: my fave..

‘Shin Hye is not a trophy so stop this already” geun suk said then He turned back again.
“ a real Man knows that he can make a girl cry, but will never ever try” Geun Suk said
“you’re going to do your best? Hey, if it’s for Shin Hye I’m going to do my bestEST” Geun Suk mockingly said
“yah! Give him a chance if you still love him, not because you think that the days you’ve been together will become a waste” geun Young advised
“You know you should think first before saying or doing anything because it’s always better not to hurt anyone than apologize after you have hurt them” geun Young said

kyaa, tq again jaymie-chan for da update!! keep up da gd work ;)
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Re:Path of LOVE 14 years 6 months ago #14111

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Hi guys. i'm back..LOL

sorry for the late update.

i got really busy these days.

I finished first my fanfic review in Winglin before doing this next chapter..

So Mianhe..

Anyway here's the next chapter..=)
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Path of LOVE- Chapter 16 14 years 6 months ago #14113

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Chapter 16: Decision

“hi sis. What are you thinking?” Geun young said

Shin Hye is in the living room in a deep thinking. She smiled when Geun Young barged in.

“I’m thinking about Hyung Joon” Shin Hye answered

“so what’s with him” Geun Young irritatingly said

“why are you like that?” Shin Hye asked when she noticed the change of facial expression of Geun Young after hearing Hyung Joon’s name.

“Nothing” Geun Young lied.

Geun Young doesn’t like him anymore. Well after all he’d done to Shin Hye. She expected too much for him.

“I want to start over with him” Shin Hye said

“WHAT?” Geun Young loudly asked with an expression like she had seen a ghost.

“why?” Shin Hye curiously asked

“nothing. If that’s what you want. It’s okay for me” Geun Young said
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Geun Young walked together along the corridor after their class, and Hyung Joon is at the corner waiting for Shin Hye as become usual since he got back from Japan.

“Yah, see you at home” Geun young said to Shin Hye and started to walk and just passed Hyung Joon without saying hi or goodbye. Shin Hye is worriedly looking at her.

“I think she really hates me” Hyung Joon sadly said

“Nah! Maybe she just didn’t notice you” Shin hye lied. She knows her friend that’s why she knows that Geun young hates him.

“uhm, I already decided” Shin Hye informed while walking.

“what is it?” Hyung Joon nervously asked. He doesn’t know if what he’s going to hear is good news for him.

Shin Hye stopped and face Hyung Joon and then she sighed.

“Let’s start over again” she said

“what?” Hyung Joon asked. He’s not sure if what he heard is right.

“Let’s start over again” Shin hye smilingly said

“really? Really? YES! Thank you” hyung Joon said

“you’ll never regret giving me a chance’ he said
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Hyung Joon walked Shin hye home. They are happily talking that geun young can hear them from inside. Shin hye opened their door and saw geun young in the living room while reading a magazine.

“I guess you’re together again’ geun young said

“yes” Shin Hye silently said

“you’re early. Did Hongki drive you home?’ Shin hye asked to change the topic

“yes, but he left immediately. They’re too busy for their final requirement in school’ geun young explained

“oh I see. So how’s geun suk?” shin hye asked

“he’s good. He’s still the same. He misses you so much. He keeps on asking me about you” geun young said

‘really?”

“yes, so try to meet him or does your boyfriend already asked you not to see him?” Geun young sarcastically said

‘yah! Geun young” Shin Hye said

‘Oh sorry. I’m just a little irritated because Hongki has no time for me at all” geun Young said.
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“Hi” Shin hye greeted. They met in a classroom.

“Finally you had time to see me. I really missed you” geun suk said

“Geun Young said you’re busy with your final requirement, sorry for asking you to come here” Shin Hye apologized

“don’t be. I’m happy that I came” geun suk said

“so, what’s up?” geun Suk asked

“uhm.. I started over with Hyung Joon” Shin Hye said

Oopps, Geun Suk heart’s ached. But he covered it with a smile.

“really? Can I congratulate you with a hug?” Geun Suk asked

“huh? Uhmm su…” before she can continue, geun Suk is already in front of her. His arms Is already around her.

“Congratulations” His heart ached

Then someone from behind him took off his hand from her

“How dare you touch my girl?” Hyung Joon shouted then gave him a punch on his face

Geun Suk didn’t expect it so he fell down on the floor and when he got up, he’s trying to punch hyung joon too but Shin Hye stopped it.

“stop it. Hyung Joon Let’s go” Shin Hye said while holding Hyung Joon’s hand.

“I’m sorry” Shin hye apologized to Geun Suk

Geun Suk was left looking at Shin Hye while touching his face where hyung Joon hitted him.
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“why did you do that?” Shin hye angrily said

“I’m sorry. It’s just seeing you with him make my blood boils’ hyung joon explained

‘he’s just congratulating me, because we’re together again” Shin hye said

‘I’m sorry” he apologized

“If it’s another man, it’s okay. But not him. I know he likes you” Hyung joon secretly thought
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After talking to hyung Joon, Shin Hye went back to the classroom. Geun Suk is still there.

“I’m sorry about that” Shin hye apologized

Geun Suk shooked his head

“I guess, this should be our last meeting” Shin hye said

‘what do you mean?’

“I don’t want you to be the reason why we fight” Shin hye said

‘let’s just pretend that we never knew each other” she added then she turned back to go outside when Geun Suk grab her hand

“If that’s what you want and if that will make you happy, then I will do it” geun Suk said

“Then for the last time, let me do this” geun suk said then he kissed her on her forehead and he let go of her hand and walked towards the door

“Agashii, it’s already time for the next class, you should go to your classroom now” Geun suk smiled and said then he walked away while controlling his tears

‘agashii?” Shin Hye said while touching her heart.

“is it really a good decision?” she said and her knees is trembling so she seated and

‘then why my heart aches?” she said and unexpectedly her tears fell down on her cheeks.
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Re:Path of LOVE- Chapter 16 14 years 6 months ago #14115

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Hi hi jaymie-unnie

woah.. it's really a long wait.. hehe

but anyway it's worth the wait.. so what's going to happen next.. i'm really curious... AHHHH... i feel like i can't sleep tonight because of thinking what's going to happen. i hope you're going to update as soon as possible.. sorry for being demanding..


hmm... your a fanfic reviewer too? you're really great.. a writer and a reviewer... I salute you.. hehe



thanks.. thanks for the update...
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Re:Path of LOVE 14 years 6 months ago #14118

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Why is Geun Suk too good to be true? *sniff sniff* Do they still make guys like that? Hahaha! If I were Shin Hye, I would feel heartache, too. Awww. Wae? Wae? Decisions, decisions.

Thanks for the update, Jaymie! We missed you here.

(= I admit I fell in love twice - the first time was with you, the second was with the person you became when you were finally mine. =)
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Re:Path of LOVE 14 years 6 months ago #14119

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Jaymie~~ your baaack..how i miz u and this...,you can always do this...hang me over.hahaha..your style..and this time dont be to long please..nice to have u back jaymie >,<
Always hoping and thinking for the good thing
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