wow..wow.. you're really fast..

thanks for the chapter 13.. shin hye feels tired because of the guys around her..

geun suk is so kind, even she loves her, he still said to her to listen to his rival's explanation..

“it’s to share jokes with a person while deep inside what you really want to share is your feelings” this line made my heart ached for Geun suk..

thanks again for updating.. you never disappoints me,, hehe


P.S. can i call you JAYMIE too?

ano jaymie-chan....

hugs* luv ur latest chp especially da words u used on GS's part:

“yah! Listen to his explanation then reject him and come to me” Geun Suk said -imo dis 1 is so funny in a straightforward way

“it’s to share jokes with a person while deep inside what you really want to share is your feelings” Geun Suk sadly said then he started the car. - so sad

i wonder what wil happen nxt maybe KS will do something/talk to HJ perhaps?? a declaration of love rival for SH's love ?

until ur nxt chp jaymie-chan so ja, matta aimasho

thats sooooooooo sad!
for geun suk and for shin hye and for Hyung Joon!
thankyou for posting another chapter!!! =)))

My bussy day, can't stop me to peek @your FF sis...
Interesting chapter... Poor KS, so now the "player" is really falling in love with our dear SH???

Jena, hi
I love that part too...
If KS is still a player, I think he woldn't say that...

new reader here!! Jaymie - can i call you this too?


i read all 13 chapters in one go. that's how good you write.

i'm now hanging on the cliff for the next one.

key notes from everything i've read --

i like how you make their emotions raw and real. like we've all been through what they've been through.

i like how you humanize each character especially GS the player. that maybe he isn't a player, he just haven't found the right one. it's definitely easy to transform and be faithful for the right person.



keep writing, so we can all keep reading. thanks for sharing your talent!

jena002 wrote:
hi Jena..

ofcourse you can call me that too..

I liked that line too, like what you said it made my heart ached too..

thanks for reading..

dita.savitri wrote:
Thanks sis...
even you're busy don't forget to get some rest..
after all, health is wealth sis..

thanks..

muah muah

earthprincess wrote:

thanks earthprincess or should i call you dorothy?

Sure, i don't mind you calling me that..=)

i'm so glad that you liked it..

Thanks again..=)

Chapter 14: A Chance


As soon as she gets inside, she immediately hugged Geun young

“I really don’t know what to do anymore” Shin Hye said

“sshh… Just don’t think too much about it” Geun Young comforted

“why do I have to face this? Why me?” shin Hye complained
-

Geun Suk called her asking if everything is alright. Shin Hye with a husky voice told him what Hyung Joon explained to her.

“I don’t know if I can still forget what he done to me” Shin Hye said

“you should live on and forget whatever bad happened in the past. To forget doesn’t mean to erase, but to no longer be influenced by the past” Geun suk advised

“I really don’t know what to do now” she said

‘just follow your heart and everything will be fine” he said
-

All classes are done and the corridors are full of students, it’s a chance for Shin Hye to go out of her classroom, because Hyung joon will not noticed her. She walks fast towards the parking lot when she saw a familiar image. She pretends that she didn’t see her and continue to walk but before she can pass her, “Shin Hye” she called

“what are you doing here, Hye Sun?” Shin Hye pretended that she just saw her.

“I’m waiting for you” Hye sun answered

“waiting for me?” Shin Hye asked

‘yes, can we have a talk?” Hye sun asked

“Sure, Let’s go to the cafeteria” Shin hye said

They went to the cafeteria, they are sitting across each other and before they can start, Shin hye’s mobile phone rings

“where are you?” the guy on the other line asked

“we’re already here at the parking lot” he added

“I have something to do, you three can go first” she said then he hungs up

“it’s Jang Geun Suk-shii right?” Hye sun asked

“yes, now, what do you want to talk about?” Shin hye asked

“I’m here to explain” Hye sun said

‘if it’s about Hyung joon, he already explained to me” Shin Hye coldly said

“did he tell you everything?” Hye sun asked

“yes, but it’s too late now, he should explain it to me beforehand” Shin Hye explained

“he tried” Hye Sun said

‘what?” Shin Hye curiously asked

“he tried to explain to you on the last minute before his flight” Hye sun said

“what do you mean?” Shin Hye asked

“he waited outside your house and he’s been calling you to explain and ask you to wait for him” ye sun said

“But he just saw you inside the car of Jang Geun Suk-shii, even he didn’t tell me I know he’s in so much pain that time” hye sun added

---“oh, I have no battery” she said while holding her phone

“here. Just save your number” he said while giving his mobile phone.
-

“I wonder who owns that car. It’s my first time to see that here in the neighborhood” she said while looking at the car that went out of their neighborhood.---

“I didn’t know” Shin Hye said

“he loves you so much Shin Hye, that’s why he went to Japan” Hye Sun said

Shin Hye was speechless then she suddenly stood up and “I’m going first, thanks Hye Sun” she said

Shin hye walks out of the cafeteria. She’s walking slowly because she’s in a deep thinking

“he really loves me” she thought

She suddenly stops when she saw Hyung Joon in front of her. For how many days that she’s avoiding him, now she decided to talk to him

“thanks for letting me to talk to you again” hyung joon said

“tell me, what do you want?” Shin Hye asked

“a chance. This time I’ll be more honest to you, so please give me a chance” Hyung Joon begged

“if that’s what you want, let me think about it first” She said
-

“what are you doing here?” Shin Hye asked. Geun Suk went to her place that night.

‘Just want to see you. coz Didn’t get a chance to see you a while ago” Geun suk said

“you talked to him right?” Geun Suk said

“how did you know?’ Shin hye asked

‘by the way I see your face” he replied

“he wants a chance” Shin hye said

“really? Hey do you know that I love you right? Can you give me a chance too?” Geun suk winked

“yah! Don’t make things more complicated” Shin hye said

“just kidding. I don’t really need a chance, you need it” Geun Suk asked

“what?”

“I want you to give yourself a chance, to love again and to be happy” Geun Suk seriously said

Whoah..GS is so kind here jaymie..he's into the battle with HJ to take SH heart but with a sweet ways,not push her but always around her hehe,but enough to tell SH that "i am here,and give me a chance to make u happy",tsk..so sweet..

I will always wait jaymie dear..^^