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Re:Path of LOVE 14 years 7 months ago #12826

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“really? Hey do you know that I love you right? Can you give me a chance too?” Geun suk winked

“yah! Don’t make things more complicated” Shin hye said

“just kidding. I don’t really need a chance, you need it” Geun Suk asked

“what?”

“I want you to give yourself a chance, to love again and to be happy” Geun Suk seriously said


KS, you're so kind... It's soooo sweet, when u try not to be selfish and doing everything just to make her happy

Jaymie, thank u very much for your concern sis :)

And also thanks for the fast update....

Luv u sis....

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Re:Path of LOVE 14 years 7 months ago #12833

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i think GS needs to prove to her how much he loves her, if he's got all those other girls and dating them i don't think SH would think about opening her heart to him or even entertain him as a suitor?

oh wells, HJ, seemed to have come back and wants to win her back....

oto kajo....what to do, SH...you've got 2 guys vying for your love....

thanks, jaymie!
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Re:Path of LOVE 14 years 7 months ago #12842

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hi jaymie

thanks for the update.... sorry if i dont comment lately....became busy and tired these days but im always updated ;)

chapter 12: GS has confessed already....so sweet but still sad

chapter 13: “hongki-ah, do you know what’s difficult to do?” Geun Suk asked while looking at Shin hye

“what?” Hongki said

“it’s to share jokes with a person while deep inside what you really want to share is your feelings” Geun Suk sadly said then he started the car.


loved this part.... GS is becoming himself now....without the playboy status already....he is really hurt while telling this

chapter 14: “he wants a chance” Shin hye said

“really? Hey do you know that I love you right? Can you give me a chance too?” Geun suk winked

“yah! Don’t make things more complicated” Shin hye said

“just kidding. I don’t really need a chance, you need it” Geun Suk asked

“what?”

“I want you to give yourself a chance, to love again and to be happy” Geun Suk seriously said


i really loved this part......

GS really loves SH here not thinking of himself but Shin hye's happiness


and shin hye why not give GS a chance to be able to get out of his playboy status and be his only one? :)
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Re:Path of LOVE 14 years 7 months ago #12986

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hi jaymie-unnie..c;

wow! chance huh? Geun Suk is so sweet to say that.. he really just wants the happiness of Shin Hye..

What are you going to do now, Shin Hye? hehehe

ne, jaymie-unnie thanks for the update..

mwuah mwuah
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Re:Path of LOVE 14 years 7 months ago #13068

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chocolate_07 wrote:
hi jaymie

thanks for the update.... sorry if i dont comment lately....became busy and tired these days but im always updated ;)

chapter 12: GS has confessed already....so sweet but still sad

chapter 13: “hongki-ah, do you know what’s difficult to do?” Geun Suk asked while looking at Shin hye

“what?” Hongki said

“it’s to share jokes with a person while deep inside what you really want to share is your feelings” Geun Suk sadly said then he started the car.


loved this part.... GS is becoming himself now....without the playboy status already....he is really hurt while telling this

chapter 14: “he wants a chance” Shin hye said

“really? Hey do you know that I love you right? Can you give me a chance too?” Geun suk winked

“yah! Don’t make things more complicated” Shin hye said

“just kidding. I don’t really need a chance, you need it” Geun Suk asked

“what?”

“I want you to give yourself a chance, to love again and to be happy” Geun Suk seriously said


i really loved this part......

GS really loves SH here not thinking of himself but Shin hye's happiness


and shin hye why not give GS a chance to be able to get out of his playboy status and be his only one? :)


it's okay katy..

i'm so touched that you spent your time commenting on every chapters..

thanks so much..

don't forget to take a rest.. don't make yourself too tired..

thanks again.

hugs.hugs
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Re:Path of LOVE 14 years 7 months ago #13071

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yes.yes. you answered comments.hehe

because you're going to update right? heheh

don't want to pressure you but i really missed your fanfiction..

i repeat reading it for the past two days.. really.. that's how much i love it.

ne jaymie-unnie update pls? pls?

thank you.
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Re:Path of LOVE 14 years 7 months ago #13076

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jena002 wrote:
yes.yes. you answered comments.hehe

because you're going to update right? heheh

don't want to pressure you but i really missed your fanfiction..

i repeat reading it for the past two days.. really.. that's how much i love it.

ne jaymie-unnie update pls? pls?

thank you.


Hi jena..

Yes, i'm going to update..

I'm still working on it so

I'll post it later after i finish it.

I'm sorry for the past few days that i didn't update..

I'm too busy, so really sorry..


anyway, thanks for reading..
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Re:Path of LOVE 14 years 7 months ago #13077

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Hello! my geunsuk_oppa , I am your new fanfic reader. Your fanfic stories( Perhaps love and this story (Path of love)) are so beautiful and interesting that I hardly wait for your newupdate. Sorry for my poor english. I'm not good at post comment , I try to write it because I just want you to know that I admire your work. Please keep on your work. Thanks you.
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Re:Path of LOVE 14 years 7 months ago #13080

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g221144 wrote:
Hello! my geunsuk_oppa , I am your new fanfic reader. Your fanfic stories( Perhaps love and this story (Path of love)) are so beautiful and interesting that I hardly wait for your newupdate. Sorry for my poor english. I'm not good at post comment , I try to write it because I just want you to know that I admire your work. Please keep on your work. Thanks you.

thanks g221144.

you can call me jaymie, if you want.=)

may i know your name?

i'm so glad you like my works..

i'm going to update later..

actually you're good in english..

thanks again..=)
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Path of LOVE- Chapter 15 14 years 7 months ago #13084

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Chapter 15: Challenge

“so what are you going to do now?” Geun young asked. They are in the living room while watching television.

“you’re going to give him a chance?” she added

“maybe, it’s not his fault at all” Shin hye said

“besides we’ve been together for a year it would become a waste if ever.” She added

“yah! Give him a chance if you still love him, not because you think that the days you’ve been together will become a waste” geun Young advised
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Geun young went to Shin Hye’s classroom, not to see her but because she knows that Hyung Joon is there waiting for Shin Hye. She wants to talk to him and clear everything.

“let’s talk” Geun Young said

They went to the back building of school so no one can interrupt them. Geun young started to ask him.

“why do you have to come back?” Geun young asked

“I need to see Shin Hye’ Hyung joon answered

“why?” she asked

‘to explain and apologize” he said

“You know you should think first before saying or doing anything because it’s always better not to hurt anyone than apologize after you have hurt them” geun Young said

“you’re just making things more complicated” she added

“what do you mean?” He asked

“you don’t understand? Why do you have to come back now, now that Shin hye is already happy being with Geun Suk” She proudly said

“Geun Suk?” Hyung Joon repeated

“yes, he’s always with her when you left her” She explained

“I feel that you like him for shin Hye” He said

“you’re right. Before I thought you’re the one who will make her happy, but I was wrong” Geun young said

Geun Young don’t like Hyung Joon anymore, or more like, she hates him. his comeback makes a hard time for shin Hye and Geun young knows that, that’s why she hates him more now that he came back than the time he left her.
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‘woah! Isn’t that early for a love letter” Hongki teased

When they get to school, Hongki and Geun Suk went to their locker to left their things. When Geun Suk opened his locker a white piece of paper dropped. He opened and read it:

We have an unfinished business. Meet me at the basketball court

“It’s not a love letter. It’s a challenge” Geun Suk said

“so do you plan to go there?’ hongki asked

“yes”

‘then I’ll go with you” Hongki said

“No, it’s my business” Geun suk said

Geun Suk went to the school gym. It’s time of classes so there’s no one there.

“You came” a guy’s voice popped out

“so it was you” Geun Suk said

“what do you want?” Geun Suk asked

‘isn’t it obvious? I want Shin Hye back” Hyung Joon said

“so I’m challenging you for a basketball game, besides our competition for MVP player is not yet through” he added

“It’s nonsense” Geun Suk said then he turned back to go out when

‘Yah! Are you afraid that I’m going to win?” Hyung Joon said

Geun Suk turned to face him then he smirked

“because I’m going to do my best” Hyung joon said

“you’re going to do your best? Hey, if it’s for Shin Hye I’m going to do my bestEST” Geun Suk mockingly said

“Then Let’s play” Hyung joon said

‘Shin Hye is not a trophy so stop this already” geun suk said then He turned back again.

“Are you a man? Not accepting a challenge?” Hyung joon mocked

It’s like his blood goes up to his head when he heard it. He turned back and walks towards Hyung joon.

“You!” Geun Suk said while pointing his finger to Hyung joon’s chest

“never say MAN in front of me, because you don’t know what it means” Geun Suk said

“what?” Hyung Joon asked

“ a real Man knows that he can make a girl cry, but will never ever try” Geun Suk said

‘now, tell me, between us, who’s the real man?” Geun Suk asked

Hyung Joon didn’t answer him. Then Geun Suk smirked and walks away from him.
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While waiting for shin Hye in the parking lot, Geun Suk, hongki and Geun young are talking outside the car.

“hey! I see that you gave all of your time to Shin Hye” geun young said to Geun suk

“is that bad?” Geun Suk asked

‘No, it’s just that, how about your girlfriends?” she asked

‘he already break up with them” Hongki said

‘why?”

“it’s because of Shin Hye” Hongki smilingly said

“Yah! Hongki-ah, you’re talking too much” Geun suk said

“is that true? I’m going to tell it to shin Hye” Geun young said

“don’t tell it to her” Geun Suk said

‘why?”

“she has too much to think now, so let’s not add up” Geun suk said
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