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POEMS 14 years 8 months ago #15853

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FALLIN'


Why can't i explain my feelings for you
When you're near to me, I don't know what to do
I try to approach you but there's a doubt in me
So I've realized that I'll just let you see.

But it's too late for us to be with each other
And know someday that we'll be together
It's hard to accept that we'll never see each other again
But still i'm hoping though I suffer in pain.

No matter where I am and what time of the day
But what matters is I will always feel the same way
In my mind, thoughts of you will always remain
That's why nobody can stop and explain.

I'm pretty sure that these things are crazy
but just for you I'd rather be
And I'll promise that I will wait for you
Until someday you'll feel what I do.
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Re:POEMS 14 years 8 months ago #15943

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nice poem..could I make one also?? :ohmy:
Where your treasure is, there will your heart be also.

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Re:POEMS 14 years 8 months ago #15946

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wow this is really cool :woohoo: ....a poem thread... all about poetry

i will post something if time permits......by the way jaymie nice poem i liked it ;)

@ gailnav

of course you can every works are welcome ;)
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Re:POEMS 14 years 8 months ago #15981

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gailnav wrote:
nice poem..could I make one also?? :ohmy:


Ofcourse you can...

I'll wait for your poem..

thanks
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Re:POEMS 14 years 8 months ago #15982

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chocolate_07 wrote:
wow this is really cool :woohoo: ....a poem thread... all about poetry

i will post something if time permits......by the way jaymie nice poem i liked it ;)

@ gailnav

of course you can every works are welcome ;)

Yes..Yes..

I'll wait for your works katy....

Thanks..=)
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POEMS 14 years 8 months ago #15984

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INSPIRATION

Everywhere I look I see your smile
Even when i walk alone along the aisle
You're the inspiration that I treasure
That's why in my mind there's no pressure

Whenever I hear your very sweet voice
I try to stop the beatings of my heart that makes noise
My only wish in my life is to hold you dear
So that my love for you will grow and will not disappear.

Everytime i accidentally see you
I do not know where to go and what to do
I can dance, I can sing, I can fly
and even touch the birds in the sky.

That's what I feel for you
Hope you feel it too
You are my real inspiration
And I will never change that decision.
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Re:POEMS 14 years 8 months ago #15985

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I just got a chance to read this thread, thank u for ur wonderful poems Jaymie.
The first one - Fallin'. got goosebumps. sweet.
and the 2nd one - Inspiration. truly inspirational words.

I can never come up with such beautiful words. oh please post more poems for us. :)
we have great talents in here. do share, we love to hear from u also.
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Re:POEMS 14 years 8 months ago #15986

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nu2me wrote:
I just got a chance to read this thread, thank u for ur wonderful poems Jaymie.
The first one - Fallin'. got goosebumps. sweet.
and the 2nd one - Inspiration. truly inspirational words.

I can never come up with such beautiful words. oh please post more poems for us. :)
we have great talents in here. do share, we love to hear from u also.


Thanks eve..

I'm glad you liked it...

Oh come on, ofcourse you can..=)


thanks again..

hugs..=)
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Re:POEMS 14 years 8 months ago #15997

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This is actually for and inspired by a Friend for making me write poetry again..... ;) and for her birthday also
A Birthday Greeting

To a friend so dear
Given such many blessings
I wish you could hear
My warm greetings

Like finding a long lost relative
Hoping to build new memories
And a sound of music that jive
Comes a friendship that is sweet as cherries

Thank you for the bond
That cannot be torn
Like the crystals in the sand
Yes friend...Thank you for being born
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Re:POEMS 14 years 8 months ago #15999

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I am definitely hooked :) hook line and sinker :silly:
that is warm and sincerely poetry, I may be able to do other stuffs but I leave this to ppl like u who has so many hidden talents.

"Thank you for the bond
That cannot be torn
Like the crystals in the sand
Yes friend...Thank you for being born"

very touching. I like that.
Thank u. :)
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