nu2me wrote:
Thank you very much eve for liking it.... that's my favorite stanza too...

yes actually my poems are always dedicated to/or inspired by someone... im also thankful for my friend because like i said i write because im inspired by someone could be a friend... loved one...just like that

Thank you for this thread, beautiful poems!!

Kat the last word you used reminds me of GMN saying that to TK "thank you for being born"

Let me share this one, i don't know if i brought the right feelings, coz' it doesn't sound good but its the first poem i ever made.

I dedicate this poem to all the MOTHERS out there.


I AM A WOMAN

I am a woman in so many ways
Not only in words but in deeds as well
Life so beautiful, it begins with me
I am a woman beautiful, elegant forever will be
Tenderly.......................lovingly.....................to much to care
.....................but so much to bare
A flower in the meadow or a soft passing breeze
wild......fierce.....................passionate ...........that is me
A joy and laughter to this maddening word
i am a wind
who gives you courage and freedom
a fire.......................
that gives you warmth and pleasure
i can be a water deep and calming
a source of life for your comfort and loving

I am a woman fragile it may seems,
sorrows...................and pains........... i shed for these tears,
hearts that bleeding.............hurting..............too deep in thoughts
why?
anger............resentment..............pains that i can endure
but so sorry, feelings that i can't norture
simply because im a woman
silently suffering..........seriously loving
joyfully caring but heartily hurting
Is it me...................or is it you?
can it be because............... because you made me a woman?

love the overflow of feelings here. Thanks to July, Chocolate and mygeunsuk_oppa.
it makes me smile all over again. It leaves me the feeling of empowerment and joy.

am not a mom, but true quintessence of a woman, a mother.

"silently suffering..........seriously loving
joyfully caring but heartily hurting
Is it me...................or is it you?
can it be because............... because you made me a woman? "

WOW !
very nice indeed.

Wow wow wow, thank all for ur poems. You all are the best .
Should we create a poems group here? A website, a fan page .... I really want to promote these poems to the world
" Love and joy are beautiful feelings, don't lose it "

oh wow sunny thank you so much....

This is for jaymie....a haiku thanking her for starting a thread like this...

Thank you for this thread
I now express my feelings
through composing poems

another haiku dedicated to my friend....when we first met

Thank you very much
For a wonderful evening
Hope to see you soon

Hi katy,

wow.. nice.. I liked it..

Friendship poem... wooh...mine are about love..hehe

ahm want to see more from you...=)

muahs..




Hi july,

nice.. I liked it too..

though i'm not yet mom,

I can really feel what do you want to express in your poem...
thanks for this...

til your next one...

chocolate_07 wrote:
Hi katy,,

you're welcome..
just want to see poems from others that's why I started this..


Katy want to see more from you...=)

til you're next one..=)


muah

a friend, stephanie, showed me this one, she's still 19 - sharing with u (not mine, just thought to share here)

Love
by Jen, Jess, Jess, & Kate

As I stare at the sky,
I see a shooting star.
I think of you
And all that we could be.

I made a wish
Upon that shooting star,
Hoping you would love me
The way that I love you.

When I looked into your eyes
I knew it was true;
I loved you,
And I thought you loved me too.

Since then you found a girl;
I wish that I was her,
But I am not,
And I won't stop wishing for you.

Day after day,
I wish you would hold me tight.
Kiss me with your soft gentle lips,
And say that you love me.

But every time I see you,
You're holding on to her;
You're kissing her so gently,
And saying you love her.

I love you more than words could say;
I wish I could hold you night and day.
I'll love you always and forever,
Even if you don't love me.

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don't we go through this teenage crush in our life. thinking of an idol crush

Thank you eve,
Somehow you make me think that every guy is bad T.T Uhm I'm a guy .
Hahaa but I'm loving this thread more and more. Thank you all for share.
I'd like to make some haikus, but don't have experience yet.

Sunny wrote:
hi sunny

this is a haiku dedicated to you

a guy named Sunny
Wants to try writing haikus
Why not do it now


there is nothing wrong in trying and there is always a first time

oh it did rain a moment ago... i usually dont like but since its very humid here I am thanking it...

Thank you for the rain
Today I really liked it
A cool breeze all day