Hi everyone, here's my own composition hope you would like it even though it's not so nice..for those who motivated/encouraged me thanks a lot..

I'm having breakfast and just read to my family, ur poem, we love it !!
it is kind, sweet and warm. and straight from ur heart. Liking it very much gailnav

I'm so proud of our talents here, sharing and love all around. Hugs, u did well. Thanks again.
and do share more.

Thanks Jaymie for the 2 poems, u r definitely good at poetry.
the first - I love you - is meant for a silent love, feeling it but not yet reciprocated. It is wonderful,

the second - Age Doesn't Matter - made me smile more
surely, age is irrelevant with love and feelings. Just knocks u off ur socks when it happens.
a 'cougar' kind of love perhaps ? interesting

love both, thank u for sharing and do share more will share with a friend, may I.

nu2me wrote:

You're welcome and Thanks too eve sis..=)

I'm really glad you liked it.

Ofcourse you can share it too to your friends, that would be nice..=)

@ mygeunsuk

loving the pieces you made. Age doesn't matter looks like the continuiation of I love you. Girl, you are so inlove? All your poems must be inspired by someone, and if im not mistaken the same person? Don't mind me, i'm just loving your work.

this is for you:

"It's loving that really hurting.
joyous feeling but sweet nothing
yet better than uncertain dying"


anyways, like i promise

Dedicate this poem to all the Fathers out there, who continuesly loving their daughters and sons and of course their wife.


MY DAD.............MY FATHER!

i know someone who can make coal from bread,
everytime he did that comes the dread
why is it difficult to make toasted bread?
why............oh why.......................oh father dear?

One day, when mom is out,
you took her place and clean the house
this is the idea i hate most
bacuase it'll end up with so much cost

You tried buying me a dress,
we walked from store to store
Finally!! i got one ..................what?
You didn't like it coz' its too short?

I know someone prenteding to read,
while i gossip and chat with friends on the lead
boys are definitely out of the question
when someone else is listening...................not to mention.

I remember the day i lost in a competition,
i cried silently without anyone in my vision,
but i was surprise you hug me at the back..................saying
with so much conviction "Baby, in my heart you are the winner"

I know someone who would love me apart from my mom,
He is kind, thoughtful, loving, silly man,
who would always be there when she's not around,
............i know...... you know who could that someone be?

Of course, its none other than my dear old dad.
He may not be perfect but made specially for me,
There's no one better surely i won't ask for other
but my sweet ....sweet father!!

Happy Father's Day!!!
to you i say,
best dad ever!!
i love you forever!!

July wrote:
Hi July,

Honestly, I'm not inlove. I just want to write and share it.
All my poems are inspired by my readers. haha

anyway thanks July for the haiku. am I right? Haiku?

I liked it..


For your piece, "MY DAD....MY FATHER"
I really liked it. it's exact for the coming Father's day...
After reading it, I feel like I should love him more.
Thanks for a great work again..

I'll wait for your next one..

continue sharing..=)

mygeunsuk_oppa wrote:
Hi jaymie
how are you?... uhm about july's work... its not a haiku... its too long for a haiku...because haiku has three lines.... 1st line and the last line has to be consist of both 5 syllables and the 2nd line or the middle part has to be consist of 7 syllables...hope that helps... but sure its still a poem... no worries

thanks ladies for ur poems loved them all... hope to post again soon...im kind of bc and tired these days..sorry about that

Thank u July for your poem - My Dad, My Father. it is very touching and warm.
I tried to let the page go by a few times, miss my father so much. He passed on. Finally read it. Very moving. Love it. He must be proud of u.

ladies, remember I will read ur poems this weekend. Well my friend Carole found out about it and asked if I could share with her.
so all ur poetry are going places. I am like a proud sis to Jaymie, Chocolate, July and Gailnav.

Thanks for sharing here and group hugs !