@chocolate07

Hi Katy,

Thanks..=)
anyway,
I'm talking about these:

"It's loving that really hurting.
joyous feeling but sweet nothing
yet better than uncertain dying"

so it's not a haiku? whatever it is I still liked it.. hehe

I'm looking forward for your next one..=)

Hugs...muahs

@nu2me

Hi eve sis,


I'm proud to be your sis too..

even we don't see each other in person,
I can feel the bond between us and with the others too..=)

hug back=)

muahs

p.s sorry a sad one again....depends really upon my mood....actually im tired these days
hope to write something for my dad..one of these days

Hi Chocolate sis, oh yes, this poem is also a bit sad and unrequited.

btw, the poems that I read, Carole and Amanda (she volunteered also) read were received with applause and smiles.
The comments for the blue love poems were: "need to meet a nice young man". "oh to h..l with him" opps, edited that one out. "don't worry, there are others out there".

All the poetry made were praised. Again, Thank you for sharing sisters ! Love u all !

jaymie--chan, im..... so speechless reading ur poem!! dat was really gd n jst right for sukkiehye couple...and every1 else too!!
kyaa, i cnt stop smiling..
kyaaaaaaaaaaaaaa, hugs, big hugs for u.... im jst too excited to finally hav da time to log in here & wat do i see?? lovely poems made by u
keep it up!!

chocolage_07, ur jst like jaymie-chan!! thank u so much!!
ur poem "a b'day greeting" is .....i almost shed tears reading it da 2nd x... i kno im gonna cry if i read it again...
kyaaaa, big bear hugs

kyonkichi78 wrote:
thanks ren-chan...

It's been a while...

so how's you? really miss you...

I'm glad you liked them...


hope you're always doing fine..


hugs hugs..

muah..=)

hi july, thanks for ur father's day poem.. jst wana share something abt dis...

July wrote:

MY DAD.............MY FATHER!

One day, when mom is out,
you took her place and clean the house
this is the idea i hate most
because it'll end up with so much cost

-for me, when mom went out my dad wud alway asked me if i wud do da cooking or shud he do it!!
my ans wud b "hw abt takeout? im too lazy to do da cleaning!! "
and dad jst agreed wit me n said, "ok then, i cooked da rice n u buy da food!!!


You tried buying me a dress,
we walked from store to store
Finally!! i got one ..................what?
You didn't like it coz' its too short?

my dad bought me a tshirt once n altho it was very cheap bt it was beautiful n unique!! i lov it n so does every1 else

I remember the day i lost in a competition,
i cried silently without anyone in my vision,
but i was surprise you hug me at the back..................saying
with so much conviction "Baby, in my heart you are the winner"

for me, it was da exams!!
tho he didnt hug me bt he gav me dis look, dis loving look (happens everytime my mum lectured me for nt getting in da top 5 placing) & told me he knew i did my very best (wich i did) & dat i shudnt b down by it!!

I know someone who would love me apart from my mom,
He is kind, thoughtful, loving, silly man,
who would always be there when she's not around,
............i know...... you know who could that someone be?

Of course, its none other than my dear old dad.
He may not be perfect but made specially for me,
There's no one better surely i won't ask for other
but my sweet ....sweet father!!

Happy Father's Day!!!
to you i say,
best dad ever!!
i love you forever!!


i wish i cn say dat to him,
dat i love him, had alwez love him mre than mom & i dnt want anyone else bt him as my father..
i wish he was still around,
to be there with me leading me, being happy for me, with me.. to my old age...
i wish it was me who died & nt him,
so dat these heartaches, missings, crying wud never hav suffice to begin with...
i wish i cud dream of him,
telling me dat he loves me, proud of me as his daughter...forgives me for everything....
but still, all these wishing is jst wishing
because it was all too late for me now...
i hope it's nt too late for anyone else....
i hope you will alwez, regardless of time
SHOW UR LOVE AND APPRECIATION TO UR DADS WHILE U STILL CaN...

fyi, my dad died of prostate cancer in july 2006... a type of cancer to hav cause many death in my country bside lung cancer and heartattacks..... 1 1/2 mth after i told him i planned to wed in dec of da yr...
i hope my rantings/sayings here didnt hurt anybody's feeling.... esp when father's day is suppose to b a happy one..

so to everyone here who still have their fathers, tell him for me, happy father's day, okay??!!

kyonkichi78 wrote:
awww thank you so much ren-chan for liking it.... im touched to know that my poem can draw so much emotion from u...

"hugs back"

ps... you also brought me to tears when i read ur comment about MY DAD....MY FATHER

Happy Father's Day to all of your Dads

@kyonkichi78

Wow, while i was reading your comment, i felt so sad and sympathetic with you. I trully understand what you mean, that's why i'm treasuring my dad while his still around while were growing although mom is always around but our dad is always at the back and the shadow but will always be there specially in the hardest time. They always have the last thing to say, and always the "final" one, that's are dad. Looks like your dad loves you so much, your dad is also lucky for having you as his daughter

My sisters and i always jokingly called my dad "the caveman", because he buys this ultra hi-tech gadgets and yet he can't operate it let alone use it. Goodness!!! He can't even operate dvd player!!! lol!!! but still he looked adorable when he ask us to open the dvd player for him We love him so much!!

@Eve

Thank you for being brave and giving yourself time to read the poem, i know it brings back sad memories, but sad it may seems, this will always reminds us how much we loved our dad and that no one can really replace them in our dear heart forever!!! This coming father's day even his not around but a mere remembrance of him will bring a tender smile on his face wherever he is.

@Chocolate

Kat, i read your sad poem, im almost feeling what your feeling!! i hope your alright now. Sweet poem FOR MY DADDY !!
How i wish i can write poem like you.