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Re: you promised. [Chapter three.] 14 years 7 months ago #12149

authors note: thanks for your feedback everyone! feel free to call me by my name or my nickname thats fine! =) hehe im posting up this chapter for now and will probably post up another one later on tonight so come back to check!! just doing final edits! thanks one again for reading!!!
[Chapter three]

“Geun Suk-ssi we have to get moving, Manager Ma told me to inform you the Van is waiting for you outside.” Geun Suk looks at once yet again, another pointless body guard that has been pinned to his side.
“ok thanks” Geun Suk takes one more sip of his Soy Latte coffee. Thanking the gathered fans, he recycles the cup on his way out. With the amount of fan girl commotion around the café, it hasn’t exactly been the rest he was looking for.
He quickly dials Hong Ki’s number to tell him about the change in plans
“Hong Ki ah, just go back to the Van. We have to go. Oh and tell Nic and Changsu will you?” closing shut his mobile; he slides his sunglasses back on and heads towards the van.

“Hyung? Geun Suk Hyung told us to go back to the Van- we have to go now. Are you with Nic Hyung? Ok good. See you both soon” Hong Ki changes the direction of his course trying to figure out where the exit is when he sees a girl stumbling towards him holding a tray of coffee.

"Juh gi-yo. Do you know where the exit is?” hesitantly asks Hong Ki while attempting to keep his distance between the coffee and his white jacket.
“umm.. sorry no” they reply with an apologetic smile.
“OMO you are….. you are… Jupiter!! Anyong haeseyo R20 Hong Ki-imnida!!” stutters Hong Ki who walks closer to get a better look at Shin Hye. “you are younger than me right? feel free to call me Oppa! haha” Hong Ki finishes with a goofy smile.
“…oh… nei… Anyong haeseyo Jupiter Shin Hye-imnida” Shin Hye is shocked by the amount of enthusiasm Hong Ki gave to his untraditional introduction.
“do you need some help?” Hong Ki is already reaching out to take the coffee tray from her.
“ah…Kamsamnida. We’re just in the board room” replies Shin Hye.
“we? You mean the other Jupiter nunas are here as well?!” Hong Ki asks again with too much enthusiasm.
“Ye…. We were here to get briefed about the CF we are doing together? ah just in this room here”
“Shin Hye! – what took you so lon----“ Jessica stopped mid sentence when her eyes landed on Hong Ki .
“Anyong haeseyo! R20 Hong Ki-imnida!!”Hong Ki saw all the nunas expression of surprise and shock.
“umm, I was helping Shin Hye ssi with the coffee?” as he placed it on the table for them.
“Kamsamnida Hong Ki ssi. Chloe -imnida. Since we are going to be working closely with R20, you can feel free to call me nuna ” warmly smiled Chloe.
“ah ye.., Chloe nuna” repeated Hong Ki who was already busy noticing how pretty they all were..
“- Jessica-ssi! You may also call me nuna! I believe you will be my boyfriend for the next few months correct? I like attentative boyfriends by the way.” grins Jessica which makes Hong Ki blush as he cleared his throat.
“haha.. yes, well I must be going. My Hyungs are waiting for me. Nice meeting you all and I look forward to working with you closely in the future.”
“Kamsamnida Hong Ki ssi” Shin Hye smiled in appreciation.
“ahh… aneyo “ Hong Ki replied and turns towards the Van.
“wow they all have a dominant personality don’t they? Must tell my hyungs! But that Shin Hye, woah.. surprisingly she is quite the sight….” Hong Ki thought to himself as he walked towards the elevator.

~~o.o ~~~

“You call to come to the Van but you take 20mins longer than I do. How does that work.” says Changsu in a ‘matter of fact’ tone as Hong Ki climbs into the Van.
“I know, Mianhe Hyung but I bumped into Shin Hye-ssi!!!” said Hong Ki excitedly.
All of a sudden all his 3 Hyungs looked at him in wonder “what?! When?! Where?!”
“Just then! As I was trying to find my way back to the Van, I bumped into Shin Hye ssi who had gone to the café for coffee so I helped her carry the coffee back! I’m a gentleman I know. Anyways and then I met the rest of Jupiter and I managed to introduced myself! Ill tell you now, they are all very pretty and have quite large personalities… especially my girlfriend” Hong Ki was rambling really fast however mumbled the last part as a personal joke to himself.
“That’s nice. This sounds like this is going to be an interesting CF. It’s definitely been a while since we’ve had those.” notes Nic who smiles at Hong Ki in acknowledgement. Nic is forever trying to be understanding towards Hong Ki’s over- enthusiasm for everything.
“Your girlfriend is really pretty too Hyung!” Hong Ki winks at Nic.
“they are not our girlfriends Hong Ki, its just for a CF. we probably wont talk to them anymore after this” says Changsu while staring out the window.
“say whatever you want! But you wont be thinking the same thing after meeting them” mumbled Hong Ki as he settled down in his seat.
“just don’t be late again Hong Ki ah, we still have a schedule you know” says Geun Suk gently. Hong Ki can only make out a blurred reflection of Geun Suk’s face and wonders why he looks so empty.
“Mianhe hyung.” replies Hong Ki.

Geun Suk is observing his members reaction to Hong Ki’s news. Nic, as always is passively calm, Changsu doesn’t look phased by the news at all and Hong Ki looks like a child who was just promised a new shiny bike for Christmas.

“So she was at the café too? same time perhaps? Why do I even care? Hong Ki is probably exaggerating. Who cares Geun Suk, seriously.” he tries to rid these thoughts from his mind. Geun Suk is trying to figure out why he is the only one who is uncomfortable with Hong Ki’s little encounter.He hates himself for being this way. He made a pact that he would never be like this again especially after that September.

You promised yourself. So Stop it”.
Last Edit: 14 years 7 months ago by sweetberry_xx.
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Re:you promised. [Chapter four.] 14 years 7 months ago #12158

[Chapter four]
Two weeks went by faster than anyone imagined. Amongst promoting their debut mini album, Jupiter was getting ready for their new CF with significant makeup and style changes. R20 were busy endorsing their other products while preparing for their comeback album.

“Does my makeup have to be this thick?” asks Shin Hye as she stares at her reflection. She sure does look much older and more elegant. The makeup defines her cheekbones and jawline which brings out her more mature side.
“don’t touch your face! It probably costs more than the outfit you’re wearing!” says makeup stylist Amy Unni.
“oh la la what do we have here? Our little Shin Hye is growing up!” says Sandra poking her head into the makeup studio. “have you seen what you’re wearing Shin Hye?” continues Sandra with a playful glee in her eye.
“ani---- why?” asks Shin Hye hesitantly.
“oh never mind. Just you wait! Geun Suk will love it!” and with that Sandra left Shin Hye wondering what was instore.
“ok all done! Off to wardrobe please Shin Hye ssi” says Amy Unni.
Shin Hye walks out of the makeup studio and heads towards wardrobe where she sees Jessica trying on her clothes for the photoshoot. As always, she looks stunning in whatever she wears and wonders how Hong Ki is going to be able to focus on the shoot with Jessica swaying next to him in her baby blue tulip chiffon dress.
“Shin Hye ah, come here! This is what you are going to be wearing! Its so pretty!!” says Jessica as she grabs Shin Hye by the arm. “Go on, try it on!!”
Shin Hye stares in amazement. She changes slowly into her dress. Not only is it the most amazing thing she has seen but the design is beyond her years. Not knowing whether she looks ok, she searches for Jessica Unni’s reaction of approval.
The dress is a deep red, with a V neckline, it flows gently all the way down defining tugging at her tiny waist with a long split on the left side of the dress exposing her long legs.
“Definitely Elegant. You look amazing Shin Hye! I hate what im wearing now!!” laughs Jessica.
“Ani Unni, you are definitely the prettiest!” says Shin Hye as she hugs Jessica.
“ah good you are both dressed. If you would like to come out, we want to do final touches and get approval for the final photoshoot. Hurry hurry!” says Stylist Ae-Young Unni.

~~o.o~~~

“Manager Ma, where are we going again?” Geun Suk asks in the middle of texting.
“We’re going to figure out the final details to your couple style and other finer details” says Manager Ma without looking up from the schedule sheet.
“ok good we’re here. Please walk towards that large building to your right. Ill be right there” says Manager Ma as he gets out of the Van.

In anticipation, they walk towards the large building and are met by the CF director in charge.
“Ahhhh anyong haeseyo, you must be R20. Please come into my office. My name is Seong-woo but people call me Six, I’ll be directing this CF . Please sit down.”
Geun Suk takes the furthest seat away followed by Changsu, Nic and Hong Ki.
“Ok our meeting will start when Jupiter gets here. Ah, you two have never met have you? Well we’ll do that first” Six finishes his own thought by himself.
Geun Suk looks around the office at all the photoshoots Six has taken.
“Pretty impressive line up… 2PM, 2AM, SHINee, Big bang….” He thinks to himself.
“Ahh here are the lovely ladies. Oh and good, you have all done your hair and makeup.” Says Six as he gets up to greet Jupiter as they walk in.
Geun Suk looks over and immediately shocked at the sight of Jupiter as they walk in one by one. Chloe… Sandra… Jessica (wow Hong Ki is definitely lucky).
He unknowingly searches for the one person who he has yet to locate.
“Where is Shin Hye ssi?” Six asks, as though he can read Geun Suk’s mind.
“oh, the stylist wanted to change her shoes. She’ll be here any moment” informs Chloe who Geun Suk immediately recognises as their leader and notes her aura of confidence.
“Jwe se hamnida! I was changing my shoes” says a puffed out Shin Hye as she enters the room.
“Anyong Haeseyo Shin Hye imnida” she introduces herself to the rest of R20. They all bow in acknowledgement while Hong Ki grins as if he has seen an old friend.
Geun Suk thinks to himself “She isn’t as great as Hong Ki makes her out to be...I guess”
Six is busy explaining the concept of the photoshoot and how they will be styled similarly to the Jupiter ladies.
Geun Suk hears Changsu whisper to Nic “Shin Hye is really pretty ey? Geun Suk sure is lucky.” To which Nic softly laughs in acknowledgement.
“do they really think Shin Hye is pretty? She is decent at most.” Geun Suk thinks to himself.

“ok so if you guys can break up into your individual couples and get to know each other better. I have to talk to your managers for a moment, if you’ll excuse me” Six gets up from his seat and walks outside.
Geun Suk watches as Jessica skips towards Hong Ki “Anyong Hong Ki!” “Anyong nuna!!”
“already so informal? Tsk tsk my maknae needs some lessons” Geun Suk mentally notes.
Nic is already pretty comfortable sitting with Chloe exchanging polite smiles and general conversation. Geun suk notes that they look good together, perhaps something may spark? It's been a long time since Nic has liked anyone Geun Suk remembers.
Changsu on the otherhand seems overwhelmed by Sandra’s personality. You can always tell when Changsu is overwhelmed because his eyebrows give the impression of being plastered on the top of his tall forehead- but Changsu being the gentlemen he is, politely nods and smiles back at Sandras jokes.

“Geun Suk ssi… have you been well?” Guen Suk turns around and sees Shin Hye politely waiting for his response.
“ahh.. yes thankyou for your concern” stutters Geun Suk.
“ive been meaning to thankyou for that other night at Music Bank when you lent me your mic pack” says Shin Hye not exactly meeting Geun Suk’s eyes.
She is very feminine and calm. I guess Changsu’s judgement wasn’t entirely off.
“oh. Not at all. That backstage guy wasn’t very nice so I thought id help you out. That’s all. I hear you did another spectacular performance.”
“ahh thankyou.” Shin Hye blushed a flush crimson.
“she blushed? That’s a little endearing. A little.” Geun Suk thought to himself.
“well I guess we are a couple, er- I mean partners for the next few months” Geun Suk says to break the silence.
“Yes. Please take care of me and ill try to perform the best I can” promised Shin Hye with a determined face.
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Manager Ma instructs R20 to go to the next room and change into their new styles. Each couple was allocated time try different poses for their concept infront of the camera.
“Ya, Nic, you and Chloe look comfortable together” noted Geun Suk
“haha I was about to say the same thing” adds Changsu.
“well what about you Changsu, hows Sandra?” asks Nic as he tries to change the subject.
“its definitely going to be interesting…..” says Changsu as he rubs the bridge of his nose with a laugh.

In the other room Hong Ki and Shin Hye are getting final touches of their makeup done.
“You seem comfortable with Unni, Hong Ki ssi” says Shin Hye with her eyes closed.
“I told you to call me Oppa! And yes Jessica Nuna is very funny” laughs Hong Ki
“and pretty too?” Shin Hye questions opening one eye to peer at his reaction to which Amy Unni immediately reprimands Shin Hye to close her eyes so as to let the eyeliner dry.
“yes well.. all of you are pretty” mumbles Hong Ki as powder is applied to his nose.
“aw, Oppa you’re making me blush” jokes Shin Hye as Hong Ki blushes and is somehow immediately fixated by a spot of dust on the floor.

“Alright. Geun Suk ssi if you can move to your left abit more. Shin Hye ssi if you can put your hand on his shoulder. Yes- just like that. More angle please!” Six is giving very clear and direct instructions. Geun Suk was see why he is so successful.
Having Shin Hye so close is a little nerve wracking. Is it because they haven’t worked with each other before? Reminding himself its only business allows Geun Suk to regain composure.
He also notes that Shin Hye is trying really hard. “figures since this is her first CF photoshoot” he mentally notes.
“Ok Geun Suk can you get closer to Shin Hye ssi please? And smile. Friendly happy vibe if you would?” Geun Suk leans closer to Shin Hye however finds a piece of her hair flickering in his face.
Gently pushing the hair back behind Shin Hye’s ears, Shin Hye suddenly squeals and runs away from the camera.
“Hyung! What did you do to Shin Hye?” Hong Ki walks in to find Shin Hye crashing into him in the process.
“Shin Hye, kunchunna? What did Hyung do?” Hong Ki is looking from Geun Suk to Shin Hye.
“Ya I didn’t do anything! I was fixing her hair and she ran away from me like I gave her a disease or something!” cries Geun Suk still staring at Shin Hye.
“ Oppa. Kunnchunna. I just have sensitive ears that’s all” she mumbles.
Oppa? Did Shin Hye just call Hong Ki, Oppa??” Geun Suk is still watching those two interact laughing intimately.
“Ok Ok lets just leave it here for today then, Hong Ki you’re next. Where is Jessica ssi?” says Six as he is signals to change the lighting for the next shoot.

“Hong Ki I never knew you were close to Shin Hye” comments Nic as they are changing out of their costumes. Geun Suk stops and watches for Hong Ki’s reaction.
“huh? Oh yea well who can resist me? Haha. Shin Hye is sweet but thats all.” replies Hong Ki half heartedly.
“What about Jessica? Hong Ki the play-yerrrr!” jokes Nic as he dodges an arm punch from Hong Ki.
“Hyung! Its not even like that!!” cries Hong Ki as he tries to chase Nic around the room after the failed arm punch.
“I guess I wasn’t the only person who noticed that Hong Ki was close to Shin Hye. But that’s not really any of my business, as long as Hong Ki doesn’t interfere with the quality of my promotions. Yes that’s is definitely why im anxious.” Geun Suk says to himself.
“Hong Ki ya – its fine if you are friends with Shin Hye but just don’t distract her from her work ok? Otherwise your Leader looks bad too, do you want that?”
“Arasso Hyung. But don’t worry, Shin Hye is a very focused person anyways” notes Hong Ki as he shoves on his brown beanie covering his thick blonde hair.
"she's not the one im worried about" thinks Geun Suk as he tightens his tie.
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Re:you promised. 14 years 7 months ago #12192

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Hi jane.
Thanks for updating.
How are you?

Btw, i'm liking how the story goes.
Your FF is very detailed.
And got unique names for the band Jupiter and R20?
Btw, may i know what R20 means?

Looking forward for the next chapter.
Thanks!
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Re:you promised. 14 years 7 months ago #12199

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hi jane

thanks for updating...its also quite fast too

this is really awesome... though ur FF is detailed u still manage to make me think what is going to happen next...makes me

wanting to read more... i enjoyed reading it thanks again and keep it coming

till the next chapter ;)
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Re:you promised. [Chapter four.] 14 years 7 months ago #12202

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hahah i've just finished reading the first chapter and i kinda like it ...
its abit like your beautiful but she's in her own band ..
cant beleive u made this up
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Re:you promised. 14 years 7 months ago #12221

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Hi jane, I just read your FF ... And I love it. Didn't realized I read until 2.30 am...
Thanks for the fast update...
:)
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Re:you promised. 14 years 7 months ago #12231

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Ya ya dita ya..i love this,alot of writers now came out..now i dont need buying novels anymore :lol:

this is another concept,band idol?awesome..i have this in my mind before,our Shin hye have alot of fans even she's not and idol band..;P then this pop up..hehehe

thank you jane..love the way ur detail story..no complain with the lenght,infact the longest the better for me..hiehie..keep up the work girl ^^
Always hoping and thinking for the good thing
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Re:you promised. 14 years 7 months ago #12246

i woke up to such a lovely comments so i thought id personally reply to you all =)

@Ketobi - haha im great thankyou! how are you?! the meaning for R20 is meant to be read as "R two - oh" which stands for the Ruggered 20's (which is the average age they all are!) plus their ruggered looks means they are all so smexy^^ hehehe

@almontel - Mama Al! thanks for reading =)) i doubt you are that much older than i! hehe but least we all share the love for PSH!

@chocolate_07 - you are so sweet! saw your msg in the shoutbox! haha glad you're liking the detail. there is a long chapter coming up but im trying to edit that as we speak! hehe i sorta base my stories on rships develop on my side of the world here! hahaha

@Bao_ - haha yea to be honest i got this idea while i was sleeping one night so decided to develop it abit more! LOLLL =)

@dita.savitri - omomo 230am?! hope you got enough sleep!!! dont get sick! but thankyou so much!!!

@elhabe25 - awww! its people like you who make me want to keep writing! thanksssssssssssss!
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Re:you promised. [Chapter four.] 14 years 7 months ago #12247

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thanks, jane for giving us 2 chaps...

i guess GS is trying his best to be 'Indifferent' to SH, but he can't seem to stop noticing her and HK...ha h aha...

i kinda wonder at the end of the previous chap what happened sometime in September??? hmmmm...u got me curious here..
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Re:you promised. [Chapter four.] 14 years 7 months ago #12411

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Hi Jane, great fanfic. I hope you update soon.
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