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TOPIC: Unexpected Love_GeunShin Fanfic ( In Progress )

Unexpected Love_GeunShin Fanfic ( In Progress ) 11 years 4 months ago #70075

Unexpected Love

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Park Shin Hye as Kim Hyo Rin
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Jang Geun Suk as Lee Jung Su
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Park Se Young as Im Hyun-Ae
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Yoon Shi Yoon as Jun Tae Hyun
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Shin Min Ah as Park Eun Sun
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Lee Hong Ki as Kang Hyun-Ki
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Park Cho Rong as Chang Yeree
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Ashida Mana as Lee Ye Rim


Chapter 1
Kim Hyo Rin is a girl full of passion. She is brave, strong, beautiful and has a big heart. Helping the people around her just made her happy. She was mean, rude and daring when she had to be, but besides that she's a kind hearted girl. She is a daughter of a very rich man. Mr. Kim owned a rich and a large company of his own. Although he knew he could give everything what the world had to offer for his daughter, he still could not give the love and care of a mother to her. Hyo Rin lost her mother in a car accident, when Hyo Rin was only nine. It was a grief for both Mr. Kim and Hyo Rin. Hyo Rin has a best friend, who she tells everything to. They were friends since kindergarten. Both of them would never leave each others sides, in schools and everywhere, except for the part when they had to go home. Now they were freshman high school students.

As the school bell rung for the lunch break, everyone rushed out of their classrooms. Hyo Rin waited eagerly outside Eun Sun's classroom, wanting to tell her something. As Eun Sun came out, she saw Hyo Rin coming to her direction. Eun Sun asked curiously "Why the happy face?" Hyo Rin quickly and excitedly replied "Guess who just asked me out?" With that Eun Sun gave a boring face to Hyo Rin and said sarcastically " Let me gues..... Oh no! I'm all out of answers since every boy in the school asked you out already!" With an annoying look Hyo Rin said " Think carefully! Who have I been crushing on for the past few weeks?! Its Jun Tae Hyun!!!!!!" With a surprised look, Eun Sun said "Really?" "Yes really, he sat next to me in class just now, and when the class was almost over he asked me if I was free tonight since today is friday." Then what did you say?" With an annoyed, face Hyo Rin looked towards Eun Sun and said "Do you actually think I would reject him? Ofcoarse I said yes, why would I say no?!" While grabbing a tray to get food in the cafeteria Eun Sun said" Ok, ok so where is he taking you?" "I don't know exactly.... I was so thrilled with the idea of him asking me out I forgot to ask....But he did tell me that he would pick me up at around five." " Well maybe its a surprise?" Eun Sun said mysteriously (in a joking way).

They sat together in the cafeteria, eating and talking happily. "I cant believe I'm going to have my first kiss tonight!" Hyo Rin said excitedly while putting food in her mouth. "You're going to kiss him tonight?!" "Yes I guess so, maybe...... why are you freaking out?" "I'm not freaking out, I just thought you wanted to have your first kiss with someone you love. Isnt that what you wanted Hyo Rin? You dont even know the guy yet and if you do love him, wait for sometime to get to know him well. How can you say that you love him? You don't even know the guy yet." Hyo Rin with a confused look, " Yeah, I guess you are right. But I think he likes me too, and I've never felt so much in love. I've never had this feeling before I think he's the one for me. And I'll think about it. Thanks anyway" Smiling happily Eun Sun said "you're welcome!"

Hyo Rin had never kissed a boy. She always wanted to share her frirst kiss with a guy who she loves and the guy who she will spend the rest of her life with. Hyo Rin was the schools prettiest and the most beautiful girl in school. Every guy in her school wanted her to be their girfriend. Sometimes Hyo Rin was forced by boys to go on a date even though she didn't like it, but at the end she was the one to break up with them, which is a hard thing to do for Hyo Rin. Since she hate to break peoples hearts.

When the lunch break had finish Eun Sun and Hyo Rin headed to their classrooms. After a tiring day, the school had finally finished for the day. Hyo Rin asked Eun Sun if she could come to her house to help her what to wear on her date with Tae Hyun. Eun Sun agreed and went inside Hyo Rin's family car. As they reached Hyo Rin's house they were met by Mr.Kim near the door entrance. "A-pa!" Hyo Rin rushed to him and embraced him. "It's nice to see you again, when did you come back fom America?" "I just came here now about an hour ago and now I'm heading to a meeting" Hyo Rin broke apart and said "So you better go now" "Before I go I wanted to tell you something, important" Hyo Rin with a curious look said "what is it? But just save it for later, I'm going on a date after some hours and Eun Sun is here to help me what to wear for my date." Mr.Kim got worried and said "So you like someone now?" "Yea a-pa whats wrong?" "Nothing, nothing. I think I should better go now" Hyo Rin enetering the house said "Ok, bye" and Eun Sun also said bye and bowed to him.

Inside the, car Mr.Kim was very worried. He thought to himself "Why did she have to like someone now? My plans will be ruined. She wont accept it now that she has someone she likes. How will I convince her?" With these thoughts in his mind he got dissapointed and said to himself "I'll deal with her later, when I get back"

Inside Hyo Rin's room It was a mess. Many clothes here and there. But she found a dress which was perfect. It was a black dress till her knees which was not too casual or not too fancy. She decided to open her hair and wore her lucky charm bracelet. She picked it up and and stared at it and remembered that her mother had given it to her for her ninth birthday present. " I remeber when my omma gave this to me, she told me to try things in life and not to be scared. She told me to wear this lucky charm whenever I needed any luck or help." Eun Sun sitting on her bed listening to her story intrestedly and said "So did this give you any luck or help?" "Yes it did, but not always, Omma told me that it wont give help or luck very easily or quickly. She told me if the luck or help dosent come then there are three things to remeber, that is not now, some other time or never." Eun Sun looking confused said "Why never?" "I even asked the same thing to omma! She said that its a sign, to tell you that what you're doing or what you want to do is not right or good for you. She also told me that if the luck or help wont come you wait and try something new in life. I didnt really understand the try something new in life part so forget it." "Yeah that is confusing" Eun Sun said while scratching her head.
Chapter 2

It was almost five o clock and the door bell of Hyo Rin's house rang. Eun Sun told Hyo Rin that she will go check if its Tae Hyun. So she rushed down stairs to the door entrance and saw a maid opening the door. Eun Sun asked the maid "Who is it" and went towards the big door herself to see who it was. She smiled when she saw that it was Tae Hyun and ushered the maid to go to work. Eun Sun took out her hand and said " Hello I'm Eun Sun, Hyo Rins bestfriend." He took out his hand too and said "Nice to meet you, and where is she?" Eun Sun pointing towards inside she said " She'll be here in a minute. Now listen, I've heard alot about you." Tae Hyun with a confused look said " About what?" Eun Sun with a scary glare said " I know how you play around with girls and break their hearts afterwards. And I even heard that you are playboy. Look my friend doesn't know anything about you, I was about to tell her but she seemed so happy about you so I didn't want to upset her. You better be nice to her or else you are dead!" Eun Sun said while folding her arms looking at him angrily. Tae Hyun with a worried expression said "No, no you've got the wrong idea. I know I've been a jerk before but I really do like Hyo Rin. I've never felt this way before about any girl, I love her I really do and every time I see her smile my heart starts beat fastly and some feeling starts to fill up my body and makes me happy." Eun Sun acting like she dosent care "Ok, ok I get it you like her but if you break her heart I'll come and get you!"

Hyo Rin heard voices from outside the entrance and decided to go and check. As to her surprise she saw Tae Hyun. Tae Hyun's eyes widen as he saw Hyo Rin stepping out. "I didnt know you came, were you waiting for long?" Hyo Rin said shyly. " Hi and don't worry, your friend kept me in company by scaring the hell out of me" he said while looking at Eun Sun. Hyo Rin got surprised and lightly punched Eun Sun on the shoulders and whispered " You scared him?!" . Eun Sun quickly changed the topic and said " I'll wait for you here, until you come back. So what time are you coming back home?" Tae Hyun said " We wont be late" he said while taking a hold of Hyo Rin's hand. Eun Sun was surprised by his action and gave him a scary glare to warn to him again. Hyo Rin stopped and turned around to Eun Sun and said " Are you sure you'll be ok alone? If you want, you can go back to your house." Eun Sun smiled and said "I'll be fine, just don't worry about me, I'll just go watch tv and stuff. So you guys go ahead and have fun! I'll wait for you!" Hyo Rin and Tae Hyun bid her goodbye and Eun Sun closed the door. She then quickly opened the door again and shouted out " Wait! You better take care of her and bring her home early!" Hyo Rin and Tae Hyun heard her and then Tae Hyun turned around and bowed to Eun Sun to let her know he understood.

Tae Hyun opened the car door to the passengers seat for Hyo Rin to sit and then went over to the drivers seat to sit himself. He then shut the door and turned the engine on. After sometime he turned to look towards Hyo Rin and said "You look beautiful." With that Hyo Rin blushed and said " Thank you, you look good too." He smiled and then said " What a friend you have there. She started threatening me, if you wouldn't come out quick god knows what would've happened there with me.'' Hyo Rin with a shy smile said " Oh sorry about that. She is just my best friend. We are pretty close. We've been best friends since kindergarten." " Well looks like she really cares about you, she kept on telling me not to hurt you and stuff.'' Hyo Rin looked down and said " Yeah I know... She just dosent want me to get miserable and hurt again." With a confused look he said '' Again?'' '' When my omma passed away in a car accident, when I was only nine I was really depressed. I remember I cried all day and night, I was pretty depressed. I even sometimes skipped school. Eun Sun hated seeing me like that. It was almost a year after I recovered from that situation. So I think she dosent want me to be like that if you'll hurt.''

"First of all I'm sorry for starting this conversation, and I'm very sorry about your mother. But you'll have to know that I'll never hurt you. I don't know if you've heard about me but I've been a jerk before playing around with girls and all but I've changed ever since I first saw you. So don't think I'll abandon you later. I think I love you" He said shyly. Hyo Rin's face lit up and said ''I think I already fell in love with you."

Tae Hyun took Hyo Rin to an expensive restuarant, where he reserved a room for the two of them. When they entered Hyo Rin saw the beautiful view of the city from the window glass, and also saw two guys playing violins. She thanked him for everything and he said '' I'm glad you liked it.'' They ate while talking to each other happily about their fun moments in life, and about their family, hobbies, and childhood.

After they were done eating, Tae Hyun stood up from his seat, while giving out his hand to her, said ''May I have this dance?" Hyo Rin shyly nodded her head and took his hands. While they were dancing slowly to the music Tae Hyun suddenly said '' I was first afraid to ask you out but it was so easy.'' '' Why were you afraid?'' Hyo Rin curiously asked. '' Since every guy in school falls for you, I thought you already had a botfriend.'' ''Then how did you know that I didn't have any boyfriend?'' " I heard someone say that you were alone, so I took the guts to ask you out.'' Hyo Rin smiled and said '' Do you know, this is the first date I ever had with the person I like.'' Surprised by her fact he said '' Really? You never been on a date before?'' '' I did go on a thousands of dates but all of them forced me to go, I never said yes.'' Tae Hyun feeling happy, said " Then I must be lucky because you said yes'' Hyo Rin looking up to him just nodded and smiled.


After they danced, Tae Hyun paid all the bills and finally walked out. Tae Hyun saw the watch and it was only seven o clock. So he decided to take her to a park. They walked hands in hands while looking around the park. Tae Hyun took a look of his watch and saw that it was eight. He then took her back to her house. He escorted her till the door entrance and said '' So we'll see each other on monday? Because I have something up on the weekends.'' '' Yea sure we'll see each other on monday then.'' Tae Hyun came close to her and embraced her lightly and said '' bye I'll miss you '' Hyo Rin a little surprised by his action said ''bye'' After they broke apart Tae Hyun was almost about to kiss her, Hyo Rin knew what he was about to do and quickly stepped back and said " Eun Sun is inside I better go in now.'' Hyo Rin said to him while giving him a kiss on his cheeks. She quickly ran inside closed the door behind her and sighed.

Eun Sun found her next to the door and said '' So how was the date?'' Hyo Rin went near her and said it was great, while smiling. Eun Sun was happy to see her like that and said "So did you kiss him? Tell me every single thing in detail. I want to know where you went, what you did.." Hyo Rin cut her in mid-sentence and said with a sigh ''It was great and all but we didn't kiss.'' Eun Sun was surprised and said ''What?!" Hyo Rin quickly said ''He was about to kiss me when he left me off but I got scared and and I just kissed him on the cheeks and ran off inside.'' Eun Sun asked Hyo Rin ''Why did you get scared?'' Hyo Rin with a confused look said ''I don't really know... something inside me just didn't feel like it.''

Outside in Tae Hyun's car he was surprised and curious. He kept on thinking about Hyo Rin, and to why she avoided his kiss. ''That was wierd, maybe she was just scared.'' He then started the engine and went to his own work. Back in Hyo Rin's house, Hyo Rin told Eun Sun about her date with Tae Hyun. After Hyo Rin had told everything, she then asked Eun Sun ''Did my a-pa already come back?''
Eun Sun thinking for a while then said ''I don't think so.. But I'm not sure why don't you ask someone?'' Hyo Rin nodded her head and asked one of her maids about her father, the maid then told Hyo Rin that he had not come back. Hyo Rin thanked the maid and left to go to Eun Sun. ''So what time are you going back?'' Eun Sun replied ''I just called my driver he'll be here aftersometime.''

They then watched tv for sometime and a maid came in and said that her driver had arrived. Hyo Rin and Eun Sun went outside. Eun Sun said ''So wanna go to the mall with me tomorrow?'' Hyo Rin confused, said ''Why you wanted something?'' ''No, no I just wanted to spend some time with you thats all.'' Hyo Rin smiled and said ''Oh ok, I'll call you tomorrow if I'm free.'' Eun Sun jumped into her car and said ''Ok, so bye bye take care!'' ''Ok I will, bye!'' Eun Sun closed the car door and waved from the inside to Hyo Rin and Hyo Rin waved her back. Hyo Rin waited outside until her car dissapeared.

Hyo Rin went back inside and decided to take a shower. After she came out she changed into her pajamas and was about to sleep and went on her bed. She heard a knock on the door and it was her maid. Her maid told her that her father had come back from work and wishes to see her in his study room. So Hyo Rin went to her fathers study. She first knocked on the door and heard her father say come in. She opened the door and said ''A-pa, you wanted to see me?'' Her father looked up and said ''Yes, yes come here and have a seat.'' Hyo Rin went to have a seat in front of her fathers desk.
Chapter 3

''Did you go to your date?'' Her father asked curiously. "Yes a-pa'' she said while looking at him. Her father looked serious and said ''Do you really like the guy?'' Hyo Rin curious to whats going on said "Yes, ofcoarse. Why?'' Hyo Rin said with a worried expression on her face. Her father took a deep breath and said "I'm sorry but I want you to break up with him. I'm really sorry.'' Hyo Rin with a surprised look said ''But why? Whats going on? Tell me!" Her father looked at her and said "I want you to marry a boy, its a business stuff. We planned to combine the company by letting you two get married. It will bring alot of benefits to the company.'' Hyo Rin with tears starting to flow, she said "Are you using me? Why do I have to marry a guy who I dont even know? I'm already in love and I'm happy with this. And besides I'm still young to marry. I don't want any of this!'' ''Hyo Rin... All your life I tried to make you happy. I gave you everything what you wanted, and I never asked you to do anything for me. So just this once try to listen to me.'' her father said seriously and a bit angrily. Hyo Rin still rejecting and crying ''So isn't that your fault? That you didn't ask me to do something for? A-pa, this is my life. I will marry who I want to marry. Why are you trying to control my life?'' She angrily said and stormed out of her fathers study.

Her father was very dissapointed and very angry. But he never saw her look so unhappy except for the time mother died. "Was I too hard on her? I know it's her life but she shouldn't talk like that to me, afterall she is my daugther" he worriedly thought.

Inside Hyo Rin's room she was laying down on her bed crying really badly. She decided to call Eun Sun but thought she would ne asleep by now, and didn't want to disturb her. She just lay back in her bed and drifted of to sleep. She was woken up by the sound of her phones ringtone. She checked who it was and then picked it up. "Hello" Hyo Rin said weakly. Eun Sun asked "Are you alright? You don't sound good. Were you still sleeping? Hyo Rin quickly said "Yes, I was just sleeping and I'm not alright. "Not alright? Are you sick?'' Eun Sun worriedly asked. ''No, I'm not. You wont believe what my a-pa said yesterday." Hyo Rin said with a sad voice. Eun Sun curiously asked "What? Tell me. Something wrong?'' ''Yes! Everythings wrong! Can you just come over? I don't feel like telling it on the phone." "Ok, I'll come over." With that they both hung up. Hyo Rin looked at the clock on the desk, beside her bed and saw that it was only nine.

Hyo Rin got up, made her bed and went to the bathroom, to wash up and then she changed her clothes. As soon as she was finished Eun Sun had arrived. They had breakfast together and after that they went to the back porch and sat on the sofa swing. Hyo Rin told everything to Eun Sun, about the talk she had with her father. Hyo Rin was still crying her eyes out. Eun Sun cupping Hyo Rin face with both her hands said "Trust me everything will be alright. This is your life Hyo Rin, you live this life and you control it. When you feel better, go talk to your father once again. I'm sure he'll change his mind." Hyo Rin still looking upset just noded her head. "If it still dosent work, I'll figure out something. So till then, stop worrying and stop putting up a sad face. Ok?" Hyo Rin weakly said "Ok" and then went closer to her and hugged her tight and said "Thankyou for being my friend, and thankyou for always cheering me up when I'm down and always saving my life when I'm in trouble. Thankyou...." Eun Sun smiled and said "Your welcome! Thats what friends do right? And no matter what I'll always be there for you." Eun Sun broke apart and got up and said "So are we still up for shopping? It's okay if you're not feeling like it." Hyo Rin quickly got up and said "No, no I'll come with you. Besides if I dont come who'll come?" Eun Sun happily said "Ok, now lets go!" Hyo Rin went over and held her arm and went to get ready.

After two hours of roaming and shopping around the mall, Hyo Rin felt tired and sat at a bench in the mall. Eun Sun put all the shopping bags on the bench, right next to Hyo Rin and said "Wait here, I'll go get us some ice-cream.'' Hyo Rin just nodded her head while saying "Ok.'' Hyo Rin saw Eun Sun while she rushed of to get ice-creams, and then thought "I may not have a mother who takes care of me and supports me but I do have a best friend who cares about me and is always there to make me smile. And I'm thankful to have a best friend like her.''

After waiting for some few minutes, Eun Sun rushed back with two ice-cream cones in her hand. Both were of chocolate flavour since it was their favorite flavour. "You know.... I've been thinking about that lucky charm story for a while now." Hyo Rin confused by her staement said "Why? Something wrong?'' Eun Sun looked at her and said "No nothings wrong, it's just that I'm starting to feel that you got bad luck." Hyo Rin still confused said "What?" "Remember yesterday, you wore that bracelet, to your date and everything went smoothly. But when you came back you got bad luck from your father. You said earlier that if bad luck comes, it's a sign to tell you that what you are doing is not good for." Hyo Rin licking her ice-cream said "Oh that story my omma told me about the three things to remember?'' Eun Sun nodded and said "Yes, look I'm just telling you that maybe... you and Tae Hyun... are a mistake...maybe?" Hyo Rin looked surprised and said "Are you trying to tell me to follow the sign of badluck?" Eun Sun looked guilty and said "Maybe... but look even though if there wouldn't be a sign I just think maybe you and Tae Hyun isn't a good idea. But I'm just telling you. Don't take this seriously." Hyo Rin busily licking her ice-cream said "Ok, I know I got badluck, but it dosent mean that I should just give up on Tae Hyun. After all I just met if for like some few hours thats all, and above all I really do like him." Eun Sun said "Ok then, if you really like him then thats fine with me."

They went back to Hyo Rin's house, and decided to have a sleepover. They had dinner, and they rented a dvd to watch for the night. While they were watching, a maid came in, and called Hyo Rin and told her her father wanted to see her. Hyo Rin looked towards Eun Sun and said "Go on, just tell him what you have to say." Hyo Rin then walked to her father's room. She was about to knock when her father already came out. They were both surprised. Hyo Rin was about to say something, when her father stopped her and said "Before you say something, I wanted to tell you, that I'm sorry I was being hard on you. I'm really sorry, and if you don't want to accept the marriage, then it's okay. I was wrong about everything, and you were right it's your life, and I shouldn't be butting in, in you love life. I'm truly sorry, it's just that I love my work, I really do and I found a way to make it more better, but I guess I should stick on what I already have."

Hyo Rin a bit surprised to hear her fathers words said "A-pa it's alright. You did make a bit mistake but it's alright, I forgive you. And I'm also sorry for shouting at you." Her father came close to her and hugged her tight. "I'll always forgive you." He brpke aprt and said "If you really found love, then hang on to him, and enjoy your life." She smilingly said "I will." Her father then said "Oh I almost, forgot to tell you that, the boy's mother wanted to see you and visit you from Seoul. Are you free tomorrow?" Hyo Rin curiously asked "What boy?" Her father quickly replied "The boy I wanted you to marry." Hyo Rin a bit dissapointed, said "Are you still making me marry that boy." "No, why? You want to?" Her father jokingly said. Hyo Rin feeling a bit angry said "No! Ofcoarse not! But Why does the boy's mother want to see me?" Her father being guilty said "Oh! I'm sorry. Did I tell you that the boy's mother was your mother's best friend?" "No, you didn't. But is it true that she was my omma's bestfriend?" Her father smiled and said "Yes, she is. I think you've met her once when you were young, but I don't think you remember." Hyo Rin thinking for a while said "No, don't remember." "But I remember, she held you in her arms when you were born, and she came to visit you when you were three or two years old.'' Hyo Rin intrestedly said "Really? Then I wanna meet her!" Her father laughed and said "Ok, I'll tell her, so tomorrow?" "Yes, tomorrow at lunch maybe." "Okay''

Hyo Rin went into her room, and told everything to Eun Sun. Eun Sun was a bit surprised and said "Your mother's best friend?" "Yes she is, and she'll be visiting from Seoul, tomorrow for lunch." "Okay."
Chapter 4

Eun Sun woke up first and went to wash up in the bathroom. Hyo Rin woke up right after Eun Sun went in the bathroom. When Eun Sun came back she found Hyo Rin getting up and said "Good morning! Awake already?" "Good morning, I just woke up." Hyo Rin said tiredly. Hyo Rin also went in to wash up. And when she came out she turned on her phone and saw two missed calls. She then saw that it was her father who had called her. She then called her father on the phone and waited for him to attend. "Hello? Hyo Rin?" then Hyo Rin said "Hello" "Were you sleeping when I called you an hour ago?" Hyo Rin shyly said "Yes, we slept late last night." Her father curiously said "We?" "Oh, Eun Sun slept over at our place, last night." Her father understood then said "Oh, okay. I wanted to tell you that she'll come today at about one." Hyo Rin said "Okay, will you be at work?" "Yes, I have few things to do." "Oh then okay bye!" Her father then said "Bye and take care." and they both hung up.

"My a-ppa said that she'll be here at about one. So will you stay here?" Eun Sun quickly said "Yes, so what time is it now?" They both saw the clock and it was ten thirty already. They were a bit worried and quickly went down to have breakfast. After they had their breakfast in their stomach's. Hyo Rin decided to cook, since she loved to cook, and Eun Sun on the other hand decided to help her out.

It was about twelve thirty, and they were almost finished cooking. Hyo Rin said "I think we should go change, come on up and I'll give you something to where." Eun Sun then said "ok'' They went up to Hyo Rin's bedroom to change their clothes and fix themselves up.
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Re: Unexpected Love ( In Progress ) 11 years 4 months ago #70098

Sorry the first chap is a little short :(
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Re: Unexpected Love_GeunShin Fanfic ( In Progress ) 11 years 4 months ago #70470

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@sayaka_caroline, Thank you for new fanfic. :) :)
The first chapter is not too short, however the forth is yes a bit short. :shy: :shy:
Keep on writing and I will be waiting for next chapter. :pray: :pray:

I think you should know that it's quite some times no one writes a fanfic. We had so many writers then, however, after we had technical problems their fanfics were missing too. :cry :cry
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Finally...

sayaka_caroline,

Thanks so much for your 1st Fanfic.

Appreciate it very much.

Congrats and Thanks again for sharing.

I am looking forward for the next fanfics. Keep creating girl.


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Re: Unexpected Love_GeunShin Fanfic ( In Progress ) 11 years 4 months ago #70484

Your welcome :-V
Yes I know that chapter 4 is short but its not finished :( I've done chapter 4 and 5 but I don't find the time to do it. But I try my best to squeeze some time to write it. ;) Well anyways thanks!
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Chapter 4


Eun Sun woke up first and went to wash up in the bathroom. Hyo Rin woke up right after Eun Sun went in the bathroom. When Eun Sun came back she found Hyo Rin getting up and said "Good morning! Awake already?" "Good morning, I just woke up." Hyo Rin said tiredly. Hyo Rin also went in to wash up. And when she came out she turned on her phone and saw two missed calls. She then saw that it was her father who had called her. She then called her father on the phone and waited for him to attend. "Hello? Hyo Rin?" then Hyo Rin said "Hello" "Were you sleeping when I called you an hour ago?" Hyo Rin shyly said "Yes, we slept late last night." Her father curiously said "We?" "Oh, Eun Sun slept over at our place, last night." Her father understood then said "Oh, okay. I wanted to tell you that she'll come today at about one." Hyo Rin said "Okay, will you be at work?" "Yes, I have few things to do." "Oh then okay bye!" Her father then said "Bye and take care." and they both hung up.

"My a-ppa said that she'll be here at about one. So will you stay here?" Eun Sun quickly said "Yes, so what time is it now?" They both saw the clock and it was ten thirty already. They were a bit worried and quickly went down to have breakfast. After they had their breakfast in their stomach's. Hyo Rin decided to cook, since she loved to cook, and Eun Sun on the other hand decided to help her out.

It was about twelve thirty, and they were almost finished cooking. Hyo Rin said "I think we should go change, come on up and I'll give you something to where." Eun Sun then said "ok'' They went up to Hyo Rin's bedroom to change their clothes and fix themselves up.

Hyo Rin came down first, and saw the house butler escorting a woman and a little girl. Hyo Rin thought " It must be her."

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Ko Soo Young as Lee Jung Su and Lee Ye Rim's mother Soo Jin

The woman saw Hyo Rin and recognized her and excitedley and surprisingly said "Hyo Rin! Is that you?" When they were close enough to each other Hyo Rin said "Yes, It's me." The woman hugged her tight and said "You've grown alot since I last saw you. Do you remember me?" breaking the hug. Hyo Rin looked confusingly and said "Um..I...I don't think so.." The woman smiled and said "It's ok, and besides the last time I saw you, you were about 2 or 3. I was your mother's bestfriend, Soo Jin. You can call me Soo jin or maybe omma." Hyo Rin a bit surprised said "Really? Do you want me to call you omma?" "Yea, Why not after all you are like a daughter to me. But it's ok if you don't want to call me omma." "Well.. I guess its ok then. From now on I'll call you omma." Hyo Rin said while smiling. Hyo Rin then looked at the little girl behind Soo Jin and said "And who is this little princess?" she said while bending down beacause the girl's height was short.

Soo jin also looked behind and said "Oh, this is my daughter Ye Rim. She is five years old." Hyo Rin smiled and pulled her cheeks and said "You are sooooo cute." Ye Rim quickly took a step behind and said "And I don't like you." Ye Rim said while folding her arms. Hyo Rin was a bit shocked at her attitude. Soo Jin said "Is that how you treat the people who are older than you?" She said while looking angrily at Ye Rim. Soo Jin looked at Hyo Rin and said "I'm sorry but to tell you the truth she is like this to all the girls who are around your age." Hyo Rin confusingly said "Why?" Soo Jin said "It's because of my son Jung Su. All the past girlfriends of my son were very proud and selfish girls. So Ye Rim thinks that all the girls are like that, and she even thinks that nice and kind girls are acting or pretending to be nice. I don't know how she gets all these stories from but I'm sorry.

"It's ok." Hyo Rin said while smiling. "You must be hungry, I made lunch so why don't you come with me to the dining room." So Soo jin and Ye Rim followed Hyo Rin to the dining room. Hyo Rin sat the two off them down and wondered what Eun Sun was doing. She excused herself and went out the room and then she finally saw her coming down. Eun Sun came near Hyo Rin and Hyo Rin said "Their here." "Ok" So the both of them went in and Hyo Rin introduced Eun Sun to them and ushered the maids to bring in the food.

While they were eating Eun Sun looked at Soo Jin's hand and said "Hey! You have the same bracelet like Hyo Rin's." Soo Jin looked at the bracelet and said "Oh, so you have it too. Did your mother give it to you?" Hyo Rin nodded and said "Yes she gave this to me on my birthday as a gift." Then Eun Sun said "So do you know the story behind that bracelet too?" Soo Jin said "Yes I know it, but the story Isn't about the bracelet." Eun Sun and Hyo Rin looked confused. So Soo Jin again said "That was your mother's did you know? We got this from my grandmother and she told us to never lose it. And we really did experience all those three things. Since the bracelet came into our lives I first experienced it, then your mother did. And we thought it was some kind a magical bracelet. But its not. ''

Eun Sun said "Wow, so what happened?" Soo Jin said "It's a long story. So I'll tell you both about it some other time, when I feel like it. They continued their talk and it was time for deserts. Hyo Rin wemt to the kitchen herself to fetch the cake she made. When she came back she sliced them into pieces and gave each and everyone a piece on their plate, and took one for herself. While stuffing her mouth, with the bites of cake, Eun Sun said "Did you know, that Hyo Rin made this cake? This my favorite chocolate cake!" Soo Jin was impressed and said "Oh, really? It's delicious! Looks like this cake is going to be my favorite too." Hyo Rin happily said "Really you like it? Thankyou!"

Soo Jin looked over at Ye Rim's plate to see if she was eating, and to her surprise Ye Rim was almost done eating the cake. And it also looked like she really liked it. So Soo Jin said "Looks like my little princess found a new favorite as well." She jokingly said. Hyo Rin and Eun Sun looked at Ye Rim too. Hyo Rin then said "Oh yeah you are done, do you want another piece?" Ye Rim looked and Hyo Rin and just nodded.

They were about to leave and Ye Rim ran outside, so Eun Sun said "Don't worry I'll find her." And went outside the room. Soo Jin and Hyo Rin got up and went out too. They were near the entrance door and Soo Jin said "Thankyou for today, I kinda had fun and by the way the cake was delicious!" Hyo Rin smiled and said "Your welcome, and I;m glad you had fun." Soo Jin then said "Ok then I'll see you soon, and just because you were forced to marry my son we'll see each other again soon. And don't worry I'm not going to force you it wasn't my idea." Hyo Rin said "Oh no it's okay now, and I hope to see you again."

They were now right outside their car and Eun Sun came with Ye Rim by her side. Then Ye Rim hopped into her car and just waved her hand and said "Bye Eun Sun Unnie!" Hyo Rin and Soo Jin were surprised. Soo Jin said to Eun Sun "What did you do to her to like you." Then Eun Sun said "Well I don't know, most kids like me alot because I'm fun!"

Then Soo Jin gave Hyo Rin and Eun Sun a kiss and a big hug and said "You have my number right? So just give me a call if you are in trouble or in need of something or someone to talk to and maybe a mother." They bid goodbye and they left.
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Re: Unexpected Love_GeunShin Fanfic ( In Progress ) 11 years 4 months ago #70487

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Thank you for your update. :) :)
So, chapter 4 is not short then. :shy: :shy:
It's getting interesting. :-V :-V
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sayaka_caroline,

Thanks for update so fast.


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I made chapter 4 a bit longer from the end, so don't forget to read it! :-V :-V
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Finally we have fanfic in this forum.. i used to visit geunshin china forum for fanfic too.. now i 've another english fanfic to read!

Thank you ! I'm looking forward to it~ Good job!

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