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An Angel came from above 13 years 5 months ago #50314

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Have you ever believe the girl you love is the girl you are destined for?

Have you ever wonder a normal human was actually an angel from the beginning?

Will you hold onto her forever?

Characters:

Park Shin Hye as Shin Eun Mi (Angel)


Lee Min Ho as Kim Du Myung (First Son)


Kim Joon as Kim Hyun Ki (Second Son)


Jang Geun Suk as Kim Jung Su (Third Son)


Kim Hyun Joong as Kim Dong Jae (Fourth Son)


Jung Yong Hwa as Kim Dong Sun (Fifth Son)


Lee Hong Ki as Kim Hyun Su (Sixth Son)


Jeon In Taek as Kim Myung Dae (Father)


Lee Si Young as Lee Hee Young


Kim Jong Hyun as Park Young Jae


Kim Hyung Joong as Han Dae Jung (Angel)


Lee Ji Ah as Song Mi Sun (Angel)


Synopsis:
Shin Eun Mi(Park Shin Hye) is a 20 year old girl who died by brain cancer and transferred to the angels above. 39 years later, she has given a chance to live in the real world. Eun Mi meets a guy, Park Young Jae(Kim Jong Hyun), who works at his dad's convenience store and offers her free food. An old man,Kim Myung Dae(Jeon In Taek), appears in the convenience store and happens to see eun mi sitting next to young jae. Myung Dae decided to just adopt eun mi since she is awful lot alone now. Eun Mi meets his other sons and actually feels that Fate made her become like this.

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Annyeong! Annyeong!

난 정말 그렇게 갑자기 떠난 죄송합니다.

난 계속에 대한 더 이상 아이디어가 " Never Experience Love"

정말 그것을 보여주는 않고 아이디어 중 일부를 유지 힘들 때문에 새로운 fanfic의 생각.

어쨌든, 난 정말 당신이 나의 새로운 한 마음이되기를 바랍니다.

Park Shin Hye X Jang Geun Suk forever!!!


compare with a big box, seems like happiness is found in a small box :3
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Re: An Angel came from above 13 years 5 months ago #50324

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My dearest Abby,

From the sinopsis, look like it's an interesting story.

Please don't wait too long for the first chapter.. kekekeke :P :P :P :P


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Re: An Angel came from above 13 years 5 months ago #50325

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wahh~ kamsahamnida unni!!!! :luvluv: :luvluv:

there's already a comment! :luvluv: :luvluv:

I thought no one would like it since i keep checking if they're are new comments but it keeps empty as it is. :cry

but thanks to you unni I'm happy as a girl with a gift! =D =D

I will work on my fanfic! I promise! thank you very much for liking it! :-V :-V


compare with a big box, seems like happiness is found in a small box :3
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Re: An Angel came from above [Chapter 1] 13 years 5 months ago #50371

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Chapter 1

Eun mi is a kind, beautiful, hard-working student. She always obey her parents and never cause a fight with them. She's the smartest one in her class so she always stay up late to study more.

3 Months later

Eun Mi is still taking the surgery because of her brain cancer while her parents keep hoping she will survive. The nurse tells her parents about the results.

"I'm sorry Ms. Shin, you're daughter did not survive the surgery."

The parents of Eun Mi cried every day that made them sick and died. Eun Mi kept hearing someone calling her name and leading her to a hill.

"a little closer eun mi..." a voice said.

"where do you want me to go...?" eun mi whispered.

"we're here"

A bright light shines upon the sky and traces to the hill which has eun mi to follow.


Background music


"are you taking me now?" eun mi asked while looking at the sky.

"you deserve to be here, eun mi. I can't wait to see you..."

Eun Mi takes one step and felt a very comfortable feeling and continues forward. She smiles as she look at the shadows of the angels and reaches out her hand.

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39 years later...

"eun mi! it's time to eat!" dae jung said.

"I'll be there, oppa!" eun mi said.

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Shin Eun Mi(Park Shin Hye)


Han Dae Jung(Kim Hyung Joon)

Dae Jung died in a car accident 66 years ago. Dae Jung is one of the most trusted male angel. He was the one who lead eun mi to the stairs of heaven disguising him as a mysterious voice. He is in love with eun mi since she was still in the real world but kept it secret as if they're only treating each other like brothers and sisters. He's heart ache when he saw that she became a true sister in the real world so he intends to follow her then.

Song Mi Sun(Lee Ji Ah)

Mi Sun is a kind, calm and beautiful 25 year old girl. she has no parents nor relatives but she only has her love. Her love died by rescuing mi sun in a fire. Mi Sun decided to commit suicide. When she made it to the heaven of angels, she befriended Dae Jung and Eun Mi.

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"Will she accept?" mi sun asked dae jung.

"why not?"

"there are also many of us who doesn't like to go back to the real world, you know." mi sun said.

"when did she ever refuse commands?" dae jung said.

"well, you got a point." mi sun said.

"eun mi!" mi sun called.

"..oh...unni!"

"do you have a second?"

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"It's alright. I accept." eun mi said.

"Are you sure?" dae jung asked.

"It's going to be hard." mi sun said.

"It's harder if I refuse." eun mi said.

"Well, if you say so." mi sun said.

"wherever you are, i'll always be there watching you, eun mi." dae jung said.

"thank you oppa. I'm gonna miss you two." eun mi said when a tear falls from her eyes.

"don't worry. just look at the sky and you'll definitely see us." mi sun said.

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Eun Mi hears a noisy traffic but this time it's as loud as if she's beside it.

"where am i?" eun mi wondered.

when eun mi woke up, she realizes she's already in the real world. she was sleeping on the sidewalk while many many guys keep looking at her and sees her like a glowing goddess.

Eun Mi tries to get up but can't then the men rushed to help her.

"..uh...thank you...uh...i..gotta go." eun mi said then she rushes to get away from then which they followed her.

"unni! oppa! i need your help..!" eun mi said then mi sun starts a strong rain to them that made them forget who were they chasing.

"oh! really thank you unni!" eun mi said then mi sun shows her face on the clouds for her.

Then an old man appears in front of her and starts to touch her but dae jung puts his hand up that creates an invisible shield to eun mi which made the old man scared and ran away.

"a...shield..? ah! thank you oppa!" eun mi said then dae jung whispered her in the clouds. "I'll always be there..."

-

The other angels called them both. They'll be unable to watch eun mi what's she's doing so they got worried.

"mi sun...what should we do...?" dae jung whispered.

"this is not good..." mi sun said.

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Eun Mi touches her heart and feels as if dae jung and mi sun are not watching her so she silently stood a meter away from the sidewalk when a huge truck was about to hit eun mi.

....

....

a guy pulled her aside!

"are you alright?" the guy asked concerned about her.

eun mi turns her head to look at him and he saw her weeping as cute as ever.

"y-..yah...why are you crying...? are you hungry? don't you have any family...?" the guy asked panicked.

eun mi didn't answer him so he decided to take her to his' dad's convenience store.

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"you're better now?" the guy asked her while looking at her eating ramen.

eun mi nodded and asked "by..the way, what's your...name...?"

"ahh...my name is Park Young Jae! what's yours?" young jae cheerfully said that made eun mi laugh and feel better again.

"My name is Shin Eun Mi. I'm a real an-...uh...I'm..a lot better now." eun mi said when she remembered that she cannot say that she is a real angel.

"Then it's nice to meet you eun mi." young jae said as he shakes his hand with eun mi.

"It's..nice to meet you too...young jae." eun mi said.

Dae jung watches them happily together which he felt jealous and plans to visit her one day.


compare with a big box, seems like happiness is found in a small box :3
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Re: An Angel came from above [Chapter 1] 13 years 5 months ago #50374

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Abby this is a nice story and interesting one, same as the other stories you made.:luvluv:
You really have a talent, keep it working.:-V
Thanks for sharing and waiting for the next chapter.:kiss1:
No one is rich enough to buy back yesterday. But if you have the character to do better things today, you would be the richest one tomorrow.
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Re: An Angel came from above 13 years 5 months ago #50376

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abby ,i love reading you fanfics,this one is quite intriguing..please update soon!
thanks..
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Re: An Angel came from above [Chapter 2] 13 years 5 months ago #50441

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Chapter 2

Young Jae shows eun mi to his apartment since she has no where to live.

"..and that is my house." young jae said as he points it to her.


"so this is what a house looks like!" eun mi thought.

"did you make this house for yourself?" eun mi asked which made young jae turn his head and laughs.

"hmm? is it funny what I just said? I was serious." eun mi thought.

"I did not build it. My dad bought it for me since he's in Japan for business." young jae said as he opens the door for her.

"oh...then you're by yourself now?" eun mi asked as she sits on the sofa.

"At first, I'm not used to it. A few weeks later I thought it was better if I can handle by myself now." young jae said.

"What about friends! don't people sometimes invite their friends over?" eun mi asked.

"you're my only friend. I don't want to be close to anybody." young jae quickly said after eun mi.

"then, why am I your only friend?" eun mi asked.

It takes a moment before young jae answered her question.

"My mom..divorced my dad and she left me and my sister with him. So she married a man in Russia and stayed there. My dad doesn't want us anyway but he was the one who payed our school fees and let us finish college. When we were old enough, He left us his convenience store so we should at least work. He bought us a house and so we won't be sleeping on the streets. My sister, Park Young Jin, became dangerously sick a few months after dad left us. They didn't care about young jin's condition instead my dad just payed her hospital fees. Then...young jin..."

"T...then what..? young jin..?"

"young jin...p..pa...passed away.." young jae continued as tears kept coming out from his eyes as well as eun mi drops a glowing tear on her right eye.

"what did I do..! I just asked a very foolish question!" eun mi thought.

"eun mi..." young jae murmured.

"w..what is it?" eun mi asked when her head is turned away from him.

"Do you know..why...why I became..close..to you...?" young jae asked while tears kept flowing nonstop.

"I don't..know.." eun mi answered.

"After young jae died, I always imagined young jin was still beside me, happily as ever. Then I saw her body about to be hit by a truck. When I saw her crying face, a smile appears in my face." young jae said.

"..hit..by a..truck..? crying..face..? wasn't that..me..?" eun mi thought as she gazes at young jae pitifully.

"I really can't believe I saw her face again. I began to be cheerful again that made me see her bright smile again." young jae continued.

"young jae..what..do you mean?" eun mi asked shyly.

"Do you want to see her picture eun mi?" young jae asked.

"..uh..well, if it's..okay for you.." eun mi said.


"..o-..oh-...oh my..sh-..she looks..a lot like..me.." eun mi said when she became very speechless after seeing the picture.

"That's why I you're my only friend. you don't know how much I wanted to see her face again." young jae said.

"young jae'ssi...I think that was..your sister I saw last time.." eun mi thought as she sighs.

-

"President, you need to get some rest."

"Don't tell me what to do!" President Myung Dae said.

"But your condition..."

"There's nothing going to happen to me! now help me get out of this hospital!"

-

"Where do you want to go Mr. President?"

"Drop me off there" He commanded.

"But sir.."

"Do you want to get fired!?" He shouted.

-

"Go get some rest and just leave me here."

"What are you going to do, President Kim? Will you be alright?" The secretary asked.

"There's no need to worry about me now go get some rest." The president said.

"I understood."

Secretary Han drives off leaving the president standing there.

"How will I explain to them..?" Myung Dae thought as he enters a convenience store.

"yah! eun mi! don't leave the door open!" young jae said as he laugh.

"wah~ It's so cold." eun mi ignored young jae while she relaxes the cold beverage cooler.

"oh! welcome, sir." young jae greeted the old man, Myung Dae.

Myung Dae goes to the beverage cooler to get some beer which he saw a girl(eun mi) leaning on the beverage cooler.

"excuse me miss but can you move for a second?" myung dae asked her when he means that he's going to get beer from the beverage cooler she is leaning on to.

"..ah..I'm sorry! I shouldn't do things like this, right? I'm so foolish!" eun mi apologized and kept puts her hand on her head.

"you're quite fun, miss. ..uhm..may I ask your name?" myung dae asked her.

"My name is Shin Eun Mi." eun mi introduced herself.

"Nice to meet you, Miss Shin Eun Mi. I'm President Kim Myung Dae." myung dae introduced himself as he reaches out his hand.

"..uh..may I ask you something...?"

"what is it?"

"what is..'President'?" eun mi sheepishly asked which made myung dae chuckle.

"Miss Shin Eun Mi, have you been to school before?" myung dae asked.

"what's a 'school'?" eun mi asked again.

Myung Dae goes to the man in the cashier(young jae) to ask something.

"excuse me but does your sister ever been to school before?" myung dae asked young jae.

"I'm sorry sir but she's not my sister." young jae said.

"Then, who is she?"

"..uh..she is my.." young jae starts to think when eun mi approaches young jae and smiled at him reminding her last time when young jin approached him as she smiles beautifully.

"she is my...girlfriend." young jae finally answered that made myung dae's eyes widen and eun mi looking puzzled.

"ah..I see..then I should get going now." myung dae said.

"thank you for coming"

"young jae!" quickly called.

"what's the matter?" young jae calmly asked.

"what did you just said to him? 'girlfriend'? I have no idea what word is that." eun mi said as her eyes look straightly at young jae.

"yah eun mi! let's go get something to eat!" young jae said.

"young jae! I have been waiting for you to say that, you know!" eun mi said with a smile on her face.

-

"Mr. President! did you left something?" the secretary asked.

"secretary Han! make a call to the boys that a someone will be visiting them." myung dae said.

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"wah~ it's delicious! do you always eat here?" eun mi asked while she keeps eating.

"It's delicious, right? I sometimes go here. This is where me and young jin used to eat everyday." young jae said.

"no wonder she has a nice brother like you." eun mi said that made young jae's heart skip a beat.

"ah..really! why am I feeling like this?" young jae thought.

"mi sun.." dae jung murmured.

"what?"

"should we go with her?" dae jung asked in a serious look.

"I guess we could see her a bit." mi sun said as she sighs.

"no..I mean..we should stay with her until she comes back." dae jung said as he faces mi sun.

"If they'd allow us I think it's not a problem. but when will we leave?" mi sun asked.

"When the time comes" dae jung murmured.

-

President Myung dae goes to the convenience store but figures that it's actually close. He goes around looking for them but nowhere to be found.

-

"What!? why would we let a stranger in? that's insane!" hyun ki shouted to secretary Han and quickly hangs up.

"who was that?" dong jae asked.

"The secretary of that stupid old man said that someone will visit us here." hyun ki replied.

"ah..really! why does he have to let some stranger in?" dong jae said.

"maybe it's not a stranger.." dong sun said.

"maybe it's a girl!" jung su said cheerfully.

"maybe it's just Miss Hee Young." hyun su said.

"she always go here to let us get attracted to her." dong sun said.

"she won people's hearts except for us." hyun su informed.

"well, she won't win me." dong jae said.

"you're really stupid, dong jae. how she like you when you never even laid eyes on girls before." hyun ki teased.

"yah! who said that thing!" dong jae shouted.

"well, she always likes me." jung su butts in.

"just how many girls do you have, jung su?" dong sun asked.

"hyung Du Myung's girls are more than yours, jung su." hyun su calmly said.

"shut up brat!" jung su shouted.

They all keep arguing until they left the living room.

-

"ah really!" young jae cursed.

"what's the matter young jae?" eun mi asked.

"I left something at the restaurant. I'll just go get it tomorrow morning." young jae said.

"I know! you go get it while i'll be the one to open the store, okay?" eun mi said as she runs to the store.

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"I wonder if customers got disappointed because the store was closed in a while.."

"oh! there you are!" a voice pops at eun mi's back.

"oh! ahjussi! are you going to buy something?" eun mi asked then myung dae grabbed her hand to the car and drives off.

"ahjussi! where are we going!? I'm scared!" eun mi shouted.


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been goin back and forth to the first chap..been familiarizing myself with the characters ..thanks for the update
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Chapter 3

Young jae went back to the convenience store finding that eun mi is not there.

"hm? where's eun mi? she told me she'll stay here but why is the store half open?" young jae wondered.

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"yah! dae jung! come here quickly!" mi sun called.

"Did something happen?" dae jung asked.

dae jung finds eun mi being taken by an old man. He became furious and was about to put his hand up just like he did last time but, his hyung gently stopped him.

"h..hyung..what are you doing? please let go of me!"

"just watch and see what will happen to them." his hyung said.

They both listened but dae jung kept clenching his fists as he waits longer.

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Myung Dae and Eun Mi stopped at by an island. Eun Mi can see the back of a big house but can't see the front. Myung Dae tells her that that's his' sons' house. When they made it to the stairs, eun mi's jaw drops.


"It's very beautiful!" eun mi said.

"you don't have a place to live right?" myung dae asked.

"Actually, young jae lets me live at his' house.." eun mi said.

"and you're borrowing rooms together?" myung dae asked.

"not exactly..young jae has 2 rooms. One for him and one for me." eun mi said.

"wait, did you two build you're own house?" myung dae asked.

"no..his father bought it for the two of them." eun mi said.

"them..?"

"young jae had a sister once then...I..I should stop now.." eun mi said.

"ahh..I see. eun mi, can I ask you something?"

"hm?"

Myung dae holds her hands gently and looks straight at her eyes.

"do you have a family?" myung dae asked anxiously.

"I don't know" eun mi replied with a smile on her face that made myung dae gaze at her.

Eun Mi's only considered family is dae jung and mi sun but since they're angels, eun mi just answered that she doesn't know.

"eun mi...do you want..to be my daughter?" myung dae asked with hesitant.

"d-d..daughter? I don't wa-..." eun mi paused when she remembered a friend in heaven saying something to her.

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"oh! what are you doing here, hyo ri?"

"eun mi unni! will you tell me a story?" hyo ri asked.

"well, alright if that's what you want then." eun mi said.

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"The End. now will you go to sleep?"

eun mi began to leave but hyo ri grabs her hand.

"unni! have you experienced being a part of a family in the real world?" hyo ri asked.

"no, why?"

"I saw a girl in the real world who grew up without a family while wondering on the streets. she was taken by a kind lady by a house full of children like me! Then a few months later, an adult man and an adult woman went on that house full of children and saw the girl. she was taken with then and I began to cry because I thought they were going to do something bad to her because she was already having fun there but they actually took her! but when the girl when to they're house, the other people welcome her as the daughter of the house. I became puzzled by the word 'daughter' that I haven't even smile a bit since she was taken by them. But I saw how much she was happy becoming a daughter than staying on the house full of children. I thought becoming a daughter is the best experience yet for a girl! don't you think, unni?"


"well eun mi, do you want to be?" myung dae asked.

eun mi begins from frown to smile and nodded as a response then they go inside the house.

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A ring from the doorbell and the Kim brothers gathered around who will answer the door. They all turned they're faces to
to Dong sun when he saw them gathering around.

"dong sun will answer!" hyun ki said while pointing at him.

"he didn't hear the doorbell." dong jae added.

"as punishment, he will answer it." hyun su said.

"fine you idiots!" dong sun said.

dong sun walks towards the door with his hands on his pockets when jung su runs to the door and says that he'll be the one to answer it since he's expecting hee young by now.

"do what you want, jerk." dong sun said as he goes back.

"hee young said she'll come right now." jung su said as he looks at his watch.

"wait!" dong sun called.

"what punk?" jung su said.

"I forgot that they're is a delivery that is going to come today that I ordered so i'll be the one to answer." dong sun said.

"get lost idiot. I'm expecting hee young this time." jung su said.

Dong jae hears them arguing and goes to them.

"you jerks are so noisy. I'll be the one to answer." dong jae said.

The doorbell rings again and they look at each other.

"I'm waiting for hee young!" jung su said.

"The delivery might be her so i'll be the one!" dong sun said.

"shut up I'll be the one to answer!" dong jae said.

It happens that three of them all opened the door and sees they're father, Kim Myung Dae.

"What do you care?" jung su said.

"We don't even need you old man." dong jae coldly said.

"What are you here for anyway? if you're here to check on us then leave." dong sun said.

"you're attitude are still like that huh? then i'll be leaving then after I send her off here." myung dae said.

"her?" the three questioned.

myung dae moves aside and introduced eun mi which got them all surprised.

"This is Shin Eun Mi or should I say Kim Eun Mi. she's younger than dong sun but older than hyun su. please take care of her for me." myung dae said then leaves.

As their father left, the three look directly at eun mi's eyes then they saw a glowing gem at the very center that made them back off as eun mi blinks.

"sh-...she..she's...our...sister!?" dong jae panicked.

"why did that old man suddenly adopt a girl?" hyun su asked himself.

jung su just gaze at her then smiles and introduced himself.

"Annyeonghaseyo eun mi. I'm Kim Jung Su."

Eun Mi smiled that made them all froze.

"Annyeonghaseyo jung su'ssi. I'm Shin Eun-...uh..I'm..Kim Eun Mi." eun mi introduced herself.

"shit! she's more cuter than hee young!" jung su thought.

All of they're heart starts beating fast but jung su did not quite realize it.

"wha-..what's this?" dong sun thought as he look at his chest.

"her smile...is so..unique.." dong jae said.


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Can't wait for chapter 4! Kamsahabnida! :p kyaa! i love your fanfics!
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