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Re: An Annoying Girl 13 years 9 months ago #37264

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thank you very much for liking my fanfic :side:

i'm really sorry that it was quite short :blush:

the thing is, i'm already grade 6 and i'm already graduating and our exam is getting close now and i have to do this once every weekdays and 2-3 every weekends :-V

but of course i will make time to continue this fanfic for u guys and i really hope u will enjoy the next one :bye:

night night :nitey:


compare with a big box, seems like happiness is found in a small box :3
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if you really like it, please *favorite* it :-V


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Chapter 3


"this is your house?" hyun joong asked her while staring at her house. :ohmy:

"yep! why you gotta problem?" :huh: shin hye asked him straightly in his eyes.

"it's quite cozy for a girl like you" hyun joong said with a smile. :side:

"are you the only one who live in this house?" hyun joong asked her.

"actually, me and my mother only live in this house" shin hye replied him.

"you and your mom?where's your dad?" hyun joong curiously asked her.

"maybe i'll tell you next time" shin hye said to him with an annoying look.

"can i ask your name?" hyun joong asked her politely.

"Park Shin Hye" shin hye replied.

"ohh, my name is-" hyun joong was interrupted by shin hye.

"Kim Hyun Joong, your really known by your fans" shin hye told him like she knows everything.

"are you a fan?" hyun joong asked her.

"i don't like fans nor i like famous people" shin hye told him.

"then why are you talking to me?" hyun joong annoyingly asked then suddenly his phone rang in his bag.

"then why did you want to take me home?" shin hye asked him with a creepy smile. :ding:

"fine, you win, shin hye'ssi" hyun joong sarcastically said. :wahaha

-

"thanks for driving me home" shin hye said to him sheepishly. :blush:

"no problem" hyun joong said to her. :bingo:

"what do you want in return?" shin hye asked him.

"no need, see you later" hyun joong said to her as he was about to leave but he didn't notice that shin hye is leaning closer to him and kissed him on the cheeks.

"see you later hyun joong'ssi" shin hye said as she pulled her groceries to her house. :bye:

"what was that? her lips is as soft as a pillow" hyun joong thought as he slowly feel his cheeks being kissed by an angel.

-


"i hope geun suk's asleep already so he won't notice that i'm at home late" hyun joong said to himself.

hyun joong entered their house and peeked if geun suk's still awake and saw that the house is empty. :piggyrabbit

"i guess he's sleeping, maybe i should go inside" hyun joong thought.

hyun joong went inside then he heard geun suk singing upstairs in the record studio.

"i should go to my room before he found out that i'm at home late" hyun joong thought and went quickly to his room

-

geun suk were peeking over hyun joong to what happened between hyun joong and that annoying girl then decided to check on him.

-

"yah, hyun joong, where were you? why are you late?" geun suk asked him in a creepy look. :ding:

"ahhhh....umm...ermm..." hyun joong mumble as he thinks for an excuse. :cry

"do you even know that girl?" geun suk said while putting his hands in his pockets.

"how did you know?" hyun joong said very shocked.

"i just saw you driving her home and on the way, i saw you two smiling each other at my window." geun suk irritatingly said.

"i just made a new friend, a girl who is cute and concern and.." hyun joong was about to finish his sentence until geun suk interrupted him.

"and how annoying she is? tell me about it" geun suk said.

" :lol: maybe :lol: " hyun joong chuckled. :P

"shin hye'ssi is quite beautiful when i see her more" hyun joong said with a sweet smile.

"shin...hye?" geun suk wondered.

"oh, her name is Park Shin Hye, her house is quite far from our house but their house is quite cozy and just the right house for them both." hyun joong told him.

"it's obvious that you like her, hyun joong" geun suk irritatingly said.

"maybe" hyun joong said with a creepy smile but hyun joong's last word made geun suk very shock and made him very angry.

both of them went to sleep as soon as they were done talking about shin hye. :nitey:

-

The next day, it's hye seon's birthday and she always wants geun suk and her celebrate even if geun suk's busy that's why geun suk doesn't want to appear on her birthday throughout the year.

"i should go to geun suk and check if he still remembers what today it is." hye seon said to herself with excitement.

geun suk always remembers her birthday but doesn't want to remember it so he just kept quiet. :imdead:

without noticing, shin hye's birthday is only one week apart from hye seon's birthday.

"umma, what about inviting my friends, is it okay?" shin hye asked her mom.

"i don't see why not, sure shin hye" her mother said as she made shin hye very happy. :side:

-

shin hye went out to feel the fresh air and rode on her skateboard and imagining to what will happen on the day of her birthday.

"i should visit my friends so they will know that they are invited before my birthday." shin hye thought and told her mom that she is going to their house and went already.

-

"pick up, oppa, pickup" hye seon thought but geun suk still not answering his phone.

"maybe i should just visit his house" hye seon thought and went inside her car and drove to his house.

-

geun suk found out that hye seon will visit him and quickly drove his car to the mall.

"hyun joong'ssi, where's oppa?" hye seon asked him.

"he went on a drive" hyun joong said while wiping his tired eyes.

"maybe his buying a gift for me so i'll just wait at home" hye seon happily said and she drove home.

"hyun joong, did she left already?" geun suk said in his cellphone.

"you owe me for a long nap" hyun joong sarcastically said.

a few hours later, hye seon is extremely sad because geun suk didn't seeher for her birthday and went to a bar and got really drunk.

"hyun joong, can you fetch hye seon home" geun suk told him.

"what!? why me!?" hyun joong asked him in a loud voice.

"she will know that i'm just hiding if i showed myself up!" geun suk replied.

"she will be extremely sad if you don't attend her birthday, geun suk!" hyun joong told him.

"just do it!" geun suk said.

hyun joong fetch her home but hye seon thought that he was geun suk so she kept saying to stay with her for the night.

-

the next day, hyun joong called geun suk "you owe me a long sleep this time, geun suk!" hyun joong said that made geun suk chuckled.

hyun joong saw his phone with a text message from shin hye that made him very happy.

he reads the message "you are invited for my birthhday next week on thursday, see you there" :) the message made hyun joong shocked and the message kept going into his mind.

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i'm quite sick right now but, i really wanted to finish this fanfic for you guys :sickr:

the next chapter is going to be that geun suk will also attend her birthday and hye seon will be extremely jealous that he attended an ordinary girl's party than going to his friend's party and as he realize she was right, he suddenly kissed shin hye on her forehead and pretended that she's his boyfriend. :luvluv:


compare with a big box, seems like happiness is found in a small box :3
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Re: An Annoying Girl 13 years 8 months ago #37315

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Thanks Sachiko12, another great fanfic, what a gifted mind you had! Great, we had you! :luvluv:
Im really excited on the next chapter! Keep on going, but Pls. dont take us too long too wait! :wahaha :wahaha :wahaha
"action speaks louder than voice"

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Re: An Annoying Girl 13 years 8 months ago #37318

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Chapter 3


"this is your house?" hyun joong asked her while staring at her house. :ohmy:

"yep! why you gotta problem?" :huh: shin hye asked him straightly in his eyes.

"it's quite cozy for a girl like you" hyun joong said with a smile. :side:

"are you the only one who live in this house?" hyun joong asked her.

"actually, me and my mother only live in this house" shin hye replied him.

"you and your mom?where's your dad?" hyun joong curiously asked her.

"maybe i'll tell you next time" shin hye said to him with an annoying look.

"can i ask your name?" hyun joong asked her politely.

"Park Shin Hye" shin hye replied.

"ohh, my name is-" hyun joong was interrupted by shin hye.

"Kim Hyun Joong, your really known by your fans" shin hye told him like she knows everything.

"are you a fan?" hyun joong asked her.

"i don't like fans nor i like famous people" shin hye told him.

"then why are you talking to me?" hyun joong annoyingly asked then suddenly his phone rang in his bag.

"then why did you want to take me home?" shin hye asked him with a creepy smile. :ding:

"fine, you win, shin hye'ssi" hyun joong sarcastically said. :wahaha

-

"thanks for driving me home" shin hye said to him sheepishly. :blush:

"no problem" hyun joong said to her. :bingo:

"what do you want in return?" shin hye asked him.

"no need, see you later" hyun joong said to her as he was about to leave but he didn't notice that shin hye is leaning closer to him and kissed him on the cheeks.

"see you later hyun joong'ssi" shin hye said as she pulled her groceries to her house. :bye:

"what was that? her lips is as soft as a pillow" hyun joong thought as he slowly feel his cheeks being kissed by an angel.

-


"i hope geun suk's asleep already so he won't notice that i'm at home late" hyun joong said to himself.

hyun joong entered their house and peeked if geun suk's still awake and saw that the house is empty. :piggyrabbit

"i guess he's sleeping, maybe i should go inside" hyun joong thought.

hyun joong went inside then he heard geun suk singing upstairs in the record studio.

"i should go to my room before he found out that i'm at home late" hyun joong thought and went quickly to his room

-

geun suk were peeking over hyun joong to what happened between hyun joong and that annoying girl then decided to check on him.

-

"yah, hyun joong, where were you? why are you late?" geun suk asked him in a creepy look. :ding:

"ahhhh....umm...ermm..." hyun joong mumble as he thinks for an excuse. :cry

"do you even know that girl?" geun suk said while putting his hands in his pockets.

"how did you know?" hyun joong said very shocked.

"i just saw you driving her home and on the way, i saw you two smiling each other at my window." geun suk irritatingly said.

"i just made a new friend, a girl who is cute and concern and.." hyun joong was about to finish his sentence until geun suk interrupted him.

"and how annoying she is? tell me about it" geun suk said.

" :lol: maybe :lol: " hyun joong chuckled. :P

"shin hye'ssi is quite beautiful when i see her more" hyun joong said with a sweet smile.

"shin...hye?" geun suk wondered.

"oh, her name is Park Shin Hye, her house is quite far from our house but their house is quite cozy and just the right house for them both." hyun joong told him.

"it's obvious that you like her, hyun joong" geun suk irritatingly said.

"maybe" hyun joong said with a creepy smile but hyun joong's last word made geun suk very shock and made him very angry.

both of them went to sleep as soon as they were done talking about shin hye. :nitey:

-

The next day, it's hye seon's birthday and she always wants geun suk and her celebrate even if geun suk's busy that's why geun suk doesn't want to appear on her birthday throughout the year.

"i should go to geun suk and check if he still remembers what today it is." hye seon said to herself with excitement.

geun suk always remembers her birthday but doesn't want to remember it so he just kept quiet. :imdead:

without noticing, shin hye's birthday is only one week apart from hye seon's birthday.

"umma, what about inviting my friends, is it okay?" shin hye asked her mom.

"i don't see why not, sure shin hye" her mother said as she made shin hye very happy. :side:

-

shin hye went out to feel the fresh air and rode on her skateboard and imagining to what will happen on the day of her birthday.

"i should visit my friends so they will know that they are invited before my birthday." shin hye thought and told her mom that she is going to their house and went already.

-

"pick up, oppa, pickup" hye seon thought but geun suk still not answering his phone.

"maybe i should just visit his house" hye seon thought and went inside her car and drove to his house.

-

geun suk found out that hye seon will visit him and quickly drove his car to the mall.

"hyun joong'ssi, where's oppa?" hye seon asked him.

"he went on a drive" hyun joong said while wiping his tired eyes.

"maybe his buying a gift for me so i'll just wait at home" hye seon happily said and she drove home.

"hyun joong, did she left already?" geun suk said in his cellphone.

"you owe me for a long nap" hyun joong sarcastically said.

a few hours later, hye seon is extremely sad because geun suk didn't seeher for her birthday and went to a bar and got really drunk.

"hyun joong, can you fetch hye seon home" geun suk told him.

"what!? why me!?" hyun joong asked him in a loud voice.

"she will know that i'm just hiding if i showed myself up!" geun suk replied.

"she will be extremely sad if you don't attend her birthday, geun suk!" hyun joong told him.

"just do it!" geun suk said.

hyun joong fetch her home but hye seon thought that he was geun suk so she kept saying to stay with her for the night.

-

the next day, hyun joong called geun suk "you owe me a long sleep this time, geun suk!" hyun joong said that made geun suk chuckled.

hyun joong saw his phone with a text message from shin hye that made him very happy.

he reads the message "you are invited for my birthhday next week on thursday, see you there" :) the message made hyun joong shocked and the message kept going into his mind.

_______________________________________

i'm quite sick right now but, i really wanted to finish this fanfic for you guys :sickr:

the next chapter is going to be that geun suk will also attend her birthday and hye seon will be extremely jealous that he attended an ordinary girl's party than going to his friend's party and as he realize she was right, he suddenly kissed shin hye on her forehead and pretended that she's his boyfriend. :luvluv:
follow your heart and you will find the right one for you


compare with a big box, seems like happiness is found in a small box :3
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Re: An Annoying Girl 13 years 8 months ago #37320

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oops i made another chapter 3 sorry :-V


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@ sachiko12: Get some rest, please. I am longing for the next chapter, however I don't want you to get sick.:nitey:

Thank you sachiko12. :luvluv: :luvluv:
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Chapter 4

It's shin hye's birthday and geun suk realize that hyun joong has been weird all day by waking up early, making a bright smile, and leaving up so early to buy something.

"geun suk.." hyun joong mumbled but, geun suk only look down on him.

"do you want to attend shin hye's birthday at 5 p.m.? i'm just going to buy her a gift. see you later" hyun joong said as he went outside and drove his car to the mall.

"tsk! it's her birthday huh?" geun suk said to himself and pouted.

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hyun joong arrived at the mall and the fans were all screaming at him.

"what would shin hye like?" hyun joong thought.

"maybe this?" hyun joong thought.

"hmmm, not quite"

"or...this?"

"hmmm...too short"

"how about this?"

"too..old"

"i think she'll like this one" :)


"now i gotta go to her party, i don't wanna be late!" hyun joong said to himself.

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"it's not that i wanna go to her party but, maybe i need some fun time for a while now" geun suk thought.

"what should i give her anyway?" geun suk thought.

"will she like this?"

"too short"

"maybe this?"

"ugh...it looks like my aunt's style of clothing.'

"how about this?"

"too weird"

"let me see this"

"too bright"

"hmmm..."

"too...simple"

"ummmm.."

"too formal for her"

"how about.."

"too little"

"i think this is it" :ding:

"this might look good on her"

"i should really get going" geun suk said as she quickly bought it and went to her party.

-

"i can't believe that it's really today!" shin hye said with excitement as she finds a dress for her to wear and decided that she could need her mom's help.

"how about this mom?"

"too formal, it has to be the perfect one for you"

"maybe this?"

"not really"

"ooh! ooh! what about this!"

"too simple, it has to be the right one for you"

"can it be this?"

"too small, i think"

"ummmm..this?"

"i like it, this should be good" ;)

shin hye wore on the dress and it was time for the party.

-

"HAPPY BIRTHDAY SHIN HYE!!!" all of shin hye's friends greeted her with glee except geun suk.

"kamsahabnida, everyone for accepting my invitations, i hope you will all have fun today" :) shin hye said with a bright smile that made hyun joong and geun suk's attention.

-

all of them all have fun including hyun joong and geun suk.

"kumaweyo, hyun joong and geun suk for attending my party" shin hye said with a sweet smile like an angel.

"we're very happy to be invited in your party, isn't that right geun suk?"
hyun joong asked him hopefully to say "yes".

"but you were the one who invited me.." geun suk whispered that made hyun joong very diappointed.

" *cough* your dress really suits you, shin hye" hyun joong sheepishly said.

"kumawa, but....don't you notice that everyone kept looking at you guys?" shin hye whispered.

"uhh..ermm...you're right.." :blush: hyun joong said.

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it's time for the gift wrapping and shin hye had already opened her gifts from hyun joong and geun suk and it's time to open the other's gifts.

http://images.boneclothingco.multiply.com/image/1/photos/329/500x500/393/A-R2-2032-blue-P1220.jpg?et=l64G%2CepaGChq3yGsXVLmyQ&nmid=320607964
"i love the shoes, mom!" shin hye happily said to her mom as she hugged her very tightly.


"kumawa, eun mi!"


"kumaweyo, rae sang'ssi"


"kumaweyo, hyun sang'ssi"


"kumawa, sang in!"


"kumaweyo, dong wook'ssi"


"kumawa, soo jin!"

shin hye was done of all her gifts at last =X

-

Suddenly....at the time that shin hye was about to blow her cake....

"oppa?" hye seon finally found geun suk and is very disappointed that he attended a girl's party than his close friend, hye seon's party.

"hye seon.." geun suk mumbled.

"who is this?" hye seon asked while bursting into tears.

"uhh...this is..." geun suk was about to finish his sentence but hye seon interrupted him.

"is...this what...you show after...not appearing on the day...of my...birthday?" hye seon said while tears kept falling on her face.

geun suk kept listening to hye seon and getting irritated since everybody is listening to what's going on between him and hye seon and suddenly...

he pulled shin hye on the side and he kissed softly shin hye on the forehead that made shin hye shocked and her position is her hands were on her mouth and her back was holding by geun suk.


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wow :D that was really long wasn't it?

that is the song on the part when shin hye has been kissed by geun suk and her heart was beating faster than a volcano exploding.

if it doesn't work, please search on youtube the song: happy bubble by winterplay


compare with a big box, seems like happiness is found in a small box :3
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Re: An Annoying Girl 13 years 8 months ago #37335

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@sachiko

im really happt that u made another chapter.....

even if u dont feeling well but please...

dont be sick bcz if u will get.... :pray:

all of us here will be sad....

please take care of ur self....

bcz ur graduation is coming near...

kekekeke :-V

keep in shape.... ♥♥♥



but now after i read the chapter 4...

i cant stop my self waiting for more chapters.. :onhot:

wahahaha :wahaha :-V

im waiting for the nxt chapter....:touched :angry1



i really love it....♥♥♥
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@elaiza

thank you for understanding what my situation it is now... :onhot: :onhot:

i'm really hoping i could graduate... :pray:

and my sickness is feeling quite better already... :-V

i will never forget to make another chapter for you guys.. :bingo:

thank you for understanding me and for liking my fanfic... :shy:

please favorite it... :piggyrabbit


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