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Re: An Annoying Girl 13 years 8 months ago #37790

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I think he is hyun joong. For some reason he cancelled his trip and he was surprised when he saw geun suk and shin hye. Am I right? he..he..:-V :-V

Dear sachiko12, as much as I want to read the next chapter, I want you to get well first then continue the fanfic. You should study right? Please take some rest....get well soon:nitey: :nitey:
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Re: An Annoying Girl 13 years 8 months ago #37793

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@Humilis

thank you for commenting... :shy:

i will tell the real answer tomorrow and see who is right... :bingo:

i'm feeling better now... :-V

but i have been absenting at school when my mom tells me to because i got really dizzy and got a very bad headache and got a fever then it's always too cold for me to sleep then i woke up suddenly and... :cry

maybe i should study... =X

thank you for commenting again by the way :bye:


compare with a big box, seems like happiness is found in a small box :3
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Re: An Annoying Girl 13 years 8 months ago #37899

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:-V


compare with a big box, seems like happiness is found in a small box :3
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Re: An Annoying Girl 13 years 8 months ago #37948

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i'll make it short because i still have some things to do so hope u'll accept it :pray:
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Chapter 7

a few moments later, both of them heard someone entering the door and shin hye thought it's another fan and geun suk thought it's manager dong sup'ssi.

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"ah-..hyun joong!" shin hye was surprised.

hyun joong saw them both together that geun suk was treating shin hye's wounds while her looking at geun suk very differently.

"sh-..shin hye! what are you doing here and..." hyun joong said then when he saw shin hye with wounds and geun suk concerned, he got actually jealous and ran into shin hye.

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shin hye explained everything to hyun joong.

"shin hye'ah, you can stay at my house" hyun joong happily said.

"ani, she doesn't need to" geun suk said with a rude look on hyun joong. which means their fighting over shin hye <3

"ani, hyun joong, it's okay if we just stay here" shin hye said and made hyun joong upset.

"shin hye'ah, how's your annoyingness" hyun joong sarcastically said that made shin hye grew her creepy smile.

"hyun joong!" shin hye said with a creepy smile.

"hmm?" hyun joong wondered.

"i..can read your mind" shin hye said.

"prove it" hyun joong smiled.

"you miss me, don't you?" shin hye with a creepy look on him that made him speechless..

"yah! i did not! we're not even that close and you're saying i missed you!?" hyun joong complained that made shin hye laughed cute and made hyun joong and geun suk stare at her.

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shin hye woke up and looked at the window.

"wahhhh~ so bright" shin hye said with tired eyes.

then shin hye saw outside a small, cute, flowers on the field and got admired then she quickly went outside to look at it closely.

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"waahhh~ so cute!" shin hye said with a bright smile.

"i didn't know that there were flowers here" shin hye said.

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geun suk woke up and looked at the window and saw shin hye looking at the flowers.

"what is she doing there?" he wondered as he went outside to check on her.

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"yah! what are you doing?" geun suk asked.

"geun suk'ssi, you're awake? i'm just looking at these flowers. i didn't know you had flowers here." shin hye said.

"you like flowers?" geun suk asked curiously.

"i love them! when manager dong sup is gonna find us a house i hoped that it was a house with full of garden flowers, trees and other beautiful things but, all i see is a house that is belong to a famous singer." shin hye explained that gave geun suk an idea.

"well, at least there is some on the back of the house!" shin hye said.

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shin hye is reading a book and hyun joong is preparing a dinner-outside for shin hye and geun suk is preparing something very special for shin hye.

shin hye's phone rang and saw her phone with 2 messages between hyun joong and geun suk but, he picked hyun joong first.

Hyun Joong:

shin hye, let's go and have dinner outside, i'll pick you up by 7:00. see you


shin hye looked at the clock and saw it's still 5:47 .

then shin hye looked at geun suk's message.

Sir Geun Suk:

go to the car, i will show you something


shin hye smiled a little and rushed to the car.

" i guess i still have time before i prepare to go dinner with hyun joong." shin hye said.

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"geun suk'ssi, where are we going?" shin hye asked confusingly.

"i want to know my heart's real intention to you." geun suk thought.

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"g-..g-...geun suk'ssi..." shin hye went speechless.

"ah-...mianhae for bringing you here, shin hye'ssi" geun suk turned breathless.

"geun suk'ssi..." shin hye's eyes were amazed.

"fine, i'll take you home." geun suk said with disappointing look.

"ani, geun suk'ssi....i....i...i love this kind of place!" shin hye said with her tears falling on her cheeks and a bright smile on her face that made geun suk's heart beat fast and think that it's like that she's the one he must not let go.

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it's 6:55 and hyun joong kept on calling shin hye but, her phone was off and hyun joong was disappointed.

hyun joong thought that he could visit the garden that he and geun suk always go when they're sad.

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hyun joong saw a girl that looks like shin hye and saw geun suk who is smiling at that girl and his heart ached.


compare with a big box, seems like happiness is found in a small box :3
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Re: An Annoying Girl 13 years 8 months ago #37998

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I think he is hyun joong. For some reason he cancelled his trip and he was surprised when he saw geun suk and shin hye. Am I right? he..he..:-V :-V

Dear sachiko12, as much as I want to read the next chapter, I want you to get well first then continue the fanfic. You should study right? Please take some rest....get well soon:nitey: :nitey:

Dear sachiko12,

I quoted myself :-V :-V

Thanks for the new chapter. :shy: :shy:
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Re: An Annoying Girl 13 years 8 months ago #38013

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@Humilis

thank you for liking it <3

hehehe :-V when i ask for whom will enter the door you knew what was in my mind already :kiss1:

after my exam, i will surely make the next chapter :bye:


compare with a big box, seems like happiness is found in a small box :3
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Re: An Annoying Girl 13 years 8 months ago #38155

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Hi sachiko12,

Finally! i got time to read others fanfics..:wahaha

Thanks for writing this...:-V

expect that I will follow you from now on...:luvluv:

I'm waiting for the next chapter...:ding:

goodluck on your exams..

i hope you'll finish it with flying colors...:pray:

Hwaiting!!!! :-V


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Re: An Annoying Girl 13 years 8 months ago #39582

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Chapter 8

hyun joong saw them both at the garden and he tried to control his tears and pretended to be happy.

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hyun joong was called by their manager while geun suk was told by hyun joong to fetch her home.

"kumawaeyo, geun suk'ssi, for showing me there." shin hye thanked happily to geun suk.

"ugh...i'm really tired....it's been a long time since i visited that place" geun suk said.

"you should get to sleep" geun suk told shin hye then suddenly shin hye lift up her toes and reached geun suk's face and kissed his cheeks softly.

"good night" shin hye said with a sweet smile and went quickly to her room.

"tsk. annoying brat" geun suk wisphered while looking at shin hye's back.

geun suk felt his cheeks the softness of her lips.

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the smell of the flowers always stuck on shin hye's nose that made her always remember her with geun suk.

shin hye puts her earphones in her ears and listened to a song.

Cry - Mandy Moore



I'll always remember
It was late afternoon
It lasted forever
And ended so soon
You were all by yourself
Staring up at a dark gray sky
I was changed

In places no one would find
All your feelings so deep inside (deep inside)
Was then that I realized
That forever was in your eyes
The moment that I saw you cry
cry..moment that I saw you cry

It was late in september
And I've seen you before (and you were)
You were always the cold one
But i was never that sure
You were all by yourself
Staring up at a dark gray sky
I was changed

In places no one would find
All your feelings so deep inside (deep inside)
Was then that I realized
That forever was in your eyes
The moment I saw you cry

I wanted to hold you
I wanted to make it go away
I wanted to know you
I wanted to make your everything, all right....

I'll always remember...
It was late afternoon...
In places no one would find...

In places no one would find
All your feelings so deep inside (deep inside)
Was then that I realized
That forever was in your eyes
The moment I saw you cry

Baby cry!
The moment I saw you cry
Oh no, no, no
i think i saw you cry

I wanted to know you!
I wanted to hold you!


after the song, shin hye falls asleep soundly. :nitey:

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shin hye's mother kept on calling her and woke up.

"eomma...what's the matter?" shin hye asked exhaustingly.

"we can go back to our old house now!" shin hye's mom said.

"really?!" shin hye asked curiously and at the same time happily with her eyes wide open.

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"i already called dong sup and said that we can come back any time here" shin hye's mom explained to her.

hyun joong smiled hopefully that they would come back while geun suk's face are like wishing like his manager isn't like that.

shin hye and her mom waved goodbye to them as they drove home.

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"waahhh~ i missed you!" shin hye happily said with a big hug.

"we're only gone for like 2-3 days and you already missed our house?" her mom asked happily.

"this house is very special and when you said that we were gonna move to another house, i think that she thought that we don't love her anymore." shin hye explained with a cute cat smirk.

"unpack your things, shin hye. we got a lot of work to do" her mom said.

shin hye and her mom unpacked their things and fixed their things around the house.

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shin hye's phone rang at the early 4:15 and looked on her phone that her friend texted her.

sang in:

let's go shopping, shin hye! at 8:00

see you later~


shin hye put her arm on her forehead and said "again..." then went to sleep again.

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At 8:15, shin hye and her friends entered the mall and heard a loud announcement.

"a performance is going to be held here at 9:00 at the 3rd floor"

"shin hye'ah!" her friends looked at her.

"no....no...no..NO!i agreed to have shopping with you but, i didn't come here to see a performance" shin hye angrily explained.

"please shin hye, this time only" her friends asked.

"fine, but i'll be hiding" shin hye nodded.

her friends accepted and went to the 3rd floor and find a place to sit.

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"i'm still too sleepy~" hyun joong said.

"i don't even know why they assigned us to perform this early" geun suk said.

"yah, geun suk! smile, arasseo!" their manager adviced them but, hyun joong didn't listened because he noticed that shin hye was there and forgot his sleepiness.

"geun suk! let's do our best!" hyun joong said with a happy smile. ;)

"yah! what happened to you?" geun suk sarcastically said as they went up to the stage.

"annyeonghaseyo for being here everyone, we hope you'll enjoy our performance" geun suk greeted and spotted shin hye hiding.

"Just Drag!" hyun joong shouted the title of the song.

"wait...is that...hyun joong and geun suk'ssi?" shin hye thought as she turned around.



geun suk's smile made shin hye can't-take-my-eyes-off at the smile and voice geun suk.

after the song, hyun joong grabbed the spotlight from geun suk.

"there's a friend here who is watching the performance and i want you to know her" hyun joong said that made geun suk and shin hye shocked.

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my exam is done! :D

i just hope that i will graduate :pray:

i will find out tomorrow :pray:

by the way, don't mind the video of Cry - Mandy Moore and just listen to the song :-V

hope u enjoy it :heartsh:


compare with a big box, seems like happiness is found in a small box :3
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Re: An Annoying Girl 13 years 8 months ago #39733

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my exam is done! :D

i just hope that i will graduate :pray:

i will find out tomorrow :pray:
Congratulation!!!! I cross my fingers you will be graduated :pray: :pray: :pray:

Thanks for updating this fanfic..:shy: :shy:
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Re: An Annoying Girl 13 years 8 months ago #39881

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thank you Humilis :-V

actually i think all of us will graduate since a while ago our teachers said that they made a way so we can all graduate even those who didn't pass the test :touched

anyway, on monday - wednesday, we will practice our graduation and on thursday, it's our rest day :nitey:

our graduation is on friday and i'm really excited but i will really miss my classmates and even my schoolmates who are really kind to me, our school will be different so i don't know yet where i should enroll to high school and the school will have different owners, and it's like it would not exist anymore :OMG :cry :(

if you'd like to suggest some new characters, feel free to comment it and i am going to look forward to it :bingo:

thanks again for liking my fanfic everyone :bye:


compare with a big box, seems like happiness is found in a small box :3
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