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Re:The Gilded Cage (In Progress) 14 years 9 months ago #4909

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wow chapter 13 left me hanging and boom chapter 14 showing Eun jung's spunk haha definitely a good chapter :lol:

thank you jessicaarron :) just keep it coming

wanting for more :silly:
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thanks, jessica...great chap...like everyone else i love how she was able to turn the tables around by getting the King to look into the matter of probably getting Concubine Su to be withdrawn from being her 'teacher'!!
good for her...what a smart girl she is...
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I'm stuck at work helping my co-worker with a deadline. So Chapter 15 won't be posted tonight. Sorry for the delay.
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No need to apologize. You go do what you have to do first. We can wait.
Thanks for all your updates so far.
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Chapter 15

The King recalled that a royal physician had been summoned earlier to attend to the Queen’s migraine and supposed that the physician would have already administered the treatment for the Queen’s ailment. Given his supposition, the King motioning for his royal attendant to step forward and ordered him to send for the royal physician. Within a very short amount time; the royal physician was able to make his way to the private library, due to the close proximity between the Gyotaejeon and the Gangneyongjeon (King’s quarters). Thinking that it would be inappropriate to examine the Princess’s injuries in the presence of so many people; the royal physician asked for permission to take the Princess to a separate room for the examination. The King agreed with the royal physician’s assessment and readily gave his permission for the examination to be conducted elsewhere. Despite his ardent desire to be present during the examination; Prince JiangSu knew that it would be better if he stayed behind to await Concubine Su’s arrival.

Once he had completed his careful inspection of Eun Jung’s injuries; the royal physician proceeded to carefully clean her wounds before gently applying a dark tinted ointment to the injured areas around her ankles. Once the ointment had been properly applied; the royal physician proceeded to wrap Eun Jung’s ankles with a cloth bandage and said, “Grand Princess Consort, your injuries are flesh wounds and should heal with the proper application of this ointment.” As he handed the ointment container to one of Eun Jung’s maids, the royal physician provided the maid with instructions, by saying, “Apply this ointment to the Princess’s ankles after her wounds have been cleaned with lukewarm water. Don’t allow the Princess’s ankles to be submerged in water or enveloped in fabrics including feet covers (socks) and walking boots for at least a week.”

Having heard the royal physician’s instructions, Eun Jung asked him, “How can I walk around barefooted? What if I need to go somewhere or what if my feet get cold at night?” After careful contemplation of Eun Jung’s questions; the royal physician replied, “It would be best for your highness to refrain from moving about during the first week of your recovery. And if your highness finds that her feet become cold at night; I would suggest that a blanket be used to cover them.” Although, Eun Jung was not thrilled with the thought of having to stay put for an entire week; she knew that the royal physician’s restrictions were for her own benefit and reluctantly agreed to do as he had instructed. Feeling a dramatic lessening of pain in her ankles, Eun Jung observed enthusiastically, “Your ointment is really amazing. My ankles feel better already. Royal physician, you should consider selling that ointment in the market place. I bet you would make a lot of money.”

Upon realizing that the Grand Princess Consort was not joking; the royal physician quickly explained, “This ointment consists of some of the rarest medicinal herbs in all of Korea and can cure even the most troublesome injuries. Therefore, it isn’t something that can be made readily available to the general public.” Surprised to learn of the ointment’s potency; Eun Jung began to think that it was quite wasteful to use it on her injury. Looking at the ointment container in her maid’s hand; Eun Jung wished that she could bring it to the orphan keeper. She thought that he could use the ointment to alleviate the persistent pain he experienced daily from an injury, which he had sustained in his youth. Fully aware that it would be impossible to do so; Eun Jung turned her attention back to more pertinent matters and said to the royal physician, “If were done here, I'd like to go back out to the private library." Consenting to her request, the royal physician motioned for her maids to help her out.

With her maids' assistance; Eun Jung returned to the King's private library just in time to hear the King reprimanding Concubine Su for her unjustifiable actions. Seeing Eun Jung at the front entrance, Prince JiangSu quickly made his way over to her and asked quietly, “Are you okay?” Eun Jung slowly nodded her head to indicate that she was fine; but still kept her attention focused on Concubine Su’s reaction to the King’s reproofs. Taking over for the maids, Prince JiangSu guided Eun Jung towards the chair that had been previously brought out for her. As she sat down, Eun Jung observed Concubine Su’s resentful glare and quickly averted her eyes to look to Prince JiangSu for reassurance. Seeing her discomfort, Prince JiangSu gripped her hand tightly to assure her that she was safe.

Feeling at ease with her husband by her side; Eun Jung turned her attention to Prince Dae Hyun’s face. Taking note of Prince Dae Hyun’s apprehension, as he knelt beside his royal mother; Eun Jung chided herself for not considering how her plan would adversely affect him. Eun Jung hoped, for Prince Dae Hyun's sake, that his royal mother would be willing to apologize to the King for her inexcusable behavior. Much to astonishment, Eun Jung listened to Concubine Su exclaim loudly, “I don’t see how my actions are unjustifiable!” Turning her attention to the King; Eun Jung recognized the familiar display of anger in his eyes, which was similar to the expression she had often seen displayed on Prince JiangSu's face.

Despite being enraged by Concubine Su’s defiant declaration, the King tried to remain calm and asked, “Are you saying that what you did was justified?” Without batting an eyelash, Concubine Su replied, “Yes, I think that everything that I’ve done is justified. Has your highness forgotten that after we were wed; the Queen mother had me endure the same type of training? As a matter of fact, the late Queen mother used the same ropes that I’ve used today.” Upon recalling his own Queen mother’s harsh treatment of Concubine Su; the stern expression on the King’s face immediately softened as he felt a lump develop in his throat. Observing that her words had worked to evoke emotions of remorse in the King; Concubine Su asked bitterly, “Were the actions of the late Queen mother justified because I was a lowly maid who won your affections? And are my actions now unjustifiable because the Grand Princess Consort comes from royalty?”

Pained to see the tears well up in Concubine Su’s eyes; the King gritted his teeth and inquired, “Since you have yourself experienced such traumatic ordeals; how could you have the heart to put the Grand Princess Consort through the same turmoil?” After a slight pause, Concubine Su turned to Eun Jung and said, “All of my past sufferings have served to teach me what is expected of me and I wanted you to learn what is expected of you as Korea’s future Queen.” Having completed her honest declaration, Concubine Su bowed deeply to the King and said, “If your highness thinks that what I’ve done is wrong; then please punish me accordingly.” Disappointed by Concubine Su’s refusal to admit her mistake; the King sighed before proclaiming, “While your actions are inexcusable; it's more troubling that you're unwilling to show any remorse for what you've done. Upon your insistence; I will apply royal law to punish you for your transgressions.”

Stunned by his royal father’s declaration, Prince Dae Hyun bowed deeply onto the ground and proclaimed, “Your highness, royal law requires that my royal mother be put to death for causing injury to a foreign dignitary. I know that my royal mother realizes that what she did was wrong; so I beg your highness for his leniency.” Horrified by the turn of events, Eun Jung stumbled out of her seat and made a formal bow onto the ground before pleading, “Your highness, please retract your decree. My injuries are minor and there’s no reason to pursue this matter any further. It was my mistake to have brought this matter to your attention.” Astonished by Eun Jung’s earnest declaration; the King asked incredulously, “Princess Soo Jin, how could you think that you’ve made any kind of mistake?”

Looking over at Concubine Su’s astounded expression, Eun Jung replied to the King's question by saying, “I know that everything, which has occurred is partly my fault. It was I who failed to recognize Concubine Su’s true intentions for training me this way. While I still don’t agree with her methods; as a member of this royal family, I shouldn't have questioned her intentions. Please don’t put her to death for something, which is partly my fault.” As he listened to Eun Jung’s words; the King felt a deep sense of admiration growing for her and felt that he had no choice but to comply with her wishes. After taking a deep breath, the King finally said, “Princess Soo Jin, since you’ve been so generous as to forgive Concubine Su for her egregious wrongdoings; I will retract my decree.”

Refocusing his attention on Concubine Su, the King continued to say, “Although, I’ve decided not to put you to death; I hereby revoke all of your authority over the Princess’s training and order you to remain confined to your quarters for a month. I suggest that you take the time to reflect upon your repulsive behavior.” Once the King had completed his amended decree; Prince Dae Hyun turned to Eun Jung to thank her for her benevolence. Despite having been spared because of Eun Jung's pleas; Concubine Su was still unmoved and simply made a formal bow to the King before thanking him for his leniency. Seeing that the King would not acknowledge her; Concubine Su requested for permission to leave. Ignoring her request; the King quickly ordered Prince Dae Hyun to take his royal mother home. After Concubine Su and Prince Dae Hyun had taken their leave, the King excused everyone else in the private library except Prince JiangSu and Eun Jung.

Once they were alone; the King reassured the royal couple that he would quickly identify a more appropriate person to provide Princess Soo Jin with her palace training. Fatigued by the events of the morning, the King excused them after instructing Prince JiangSu to properly care for Princess Soo Jin during her recovery. Aware of the distress she had caused the King, Eun Jung sincerely thanked him for everything that he had done for her. After the King had taken his leave, Eun Jung re-focused her attention on Prince JiangSu’s face and took note of his worn expression. Grateful for his help in the matter, Eun Jung said, “I’m really happy that you’re here with me. After this horrible ordeal, I know that I can’t deal with everything on my own.” Happy to have received her acknowledgment of his efforts; Prince JiangSu suggested that they head back home.

Along the way back to their residence, Prince JiangSu wondered why Eun Jung would help Concubine Su and asked, “Don't you realize that your forgiveness of Concubine Su's transgressions will only give her more opportunities to hurt you in the future?” Thinking about her own transgressions against Prince JiangSu, the royal family and just about everyone else in Korea; Eun Jung replied, “Sometimes people do things without thinking about how it affects other people. But if there’s a reason why they’re doing those things, don’t you think we should try to forgive them?” Since he did not understanding Eun Jung’s hidden meaning, Prince JiangSu asked, “What acceptable reason could Concubine Su have to hurt you?”

Realizing that they were talking about two very different things; Eun Jung focused on Prince JiangSu's actual question and replied, “I think that even though Concubine Su is now royalty, she must still feel like an outsider. And since people mistreated her in the past; she probably just needs to take out her anger on someone who’s also an outsider.” Having heard her response; Prince JiangSu halted his steps, turned to Eun Jung and lifted her chin with his hand. When he was sure that she was focus on his face, Prince JiangSu observed earnestly, “Soo Jin you are not an outsider. You’re Prince JiangSu’s wife. Do you understand?” Staring into his mesmerizing brown eyes, Eun Jung nodded her head diffidently and replied, “I do understand.”
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Re:The Gilded Cage (In Progress) 14 years 9 months ago #5124

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Re:The Gilded Cage (In Progress) 14 years 9 months ago #5127

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Thank you Jesicca. I love romance novels but I never had the chance to read ones that the setting is in Asia. Interesting. I have not seen any Asian drama except YB. I only like romance comedies just like this. i am not into crying too much even if I do cry at the drop of a hat. I have a feeling this will be one of them. You're writing is so engaging and engrossing. Have you ever tried having your fictions published? They are really good. Better than some I have read. And I have read lots of books.
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Re:The Gilded Cage (In Progress) 14 years 9 months ago #5147

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That hits me to the core. Nicely written, very good Jessicaaron. Thank you for coming up with this storyline.

Eun Jung shows us her kind heart (thinking about helping the orphan keeper, asking for mercy re the royal law to punish Concubine Su) and maturity in her reasoning.

Oh, my flustered heart, sweet loving Prince JiangSu (his mersmerizing brown eyes, I just fainted here).
Admiring our couple more and more.


am really getting nervous just about what may become !?!
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Re:The Gilded Cage (In Progress) 14 years 9 months ago #5219

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Chapter 16

Eun Jung became extremely self-conscious, upon realizing that the maids were closely watching her intimate exchange with Prince JiangSu, and quickly looked away to focus her gaze on to the ground. Prince JiangSu smiled knowingly, as he took note of her adorable bashfulness, and proceeded to confidently drape his arm around her shoulders to pull her in closer to his body. Finding that she was suddenly acutely sensitive to Prince JiangSu’s touch; Eun Jung felt her cheeks become flushed, and thought that her heart would burst right out of her chest. Upon seeing Eun Jung’s flustered expression; Prince JiangSu could not help but to disregard the Palace protocol of refraining from exhibiting any public displays of affection. Moving his face closer to Eun Jung’s left cheek; Prince JiangSu asked in a barely audible whisper, “Is that other man’s image slowly disappearing from your heart?” Feeling somewhat light-headed, Eun Jung slowly nodded her head and replied honestly, “I don’t think that I can even recall what he looks like.” Prince Jiangsu was pleased with Eun Jung’s response and smiled widely as he ushered her forward so that they could go home.

When they arrived at the main gates of the Jaseondang; Prince JiangSu and Eun Jung were met by several of Concubine Su’s attendants. After permitting the attendants to stand from their bowed position, Prince JiangSu asked warily, “What is your business here?” To which, the highest ranking attendant quickly replied, “Prince Dae Hyun has ordered us to bring these offerings to your highness and the Grand Princess Consort to express his gratitude.” Motioning for his attendants to take the offerings; Prince JiangSu addressed Concubine Su’s attendants with an air of indifference and ordered, “Convey our appreciation to Prince Dae Hyun for these offerings; but tell him that neither I nor the Grand Princess Consort want to dwell on this matter any further.” Having received Prince JiangSu’s terse order; Concubine Su’s attendants bowed formally before taking their leave of the royal couple.

Despite her eagerness to see the items, which were included in Prince Dae Hyun’s offerings; Eun Jung found that she would not be able to do so, until her maids had properly tended to her injuries. After Eun Jung’s maids assisted her to an unoccupied room, adjacent to the one used to house her clothing; they proceeded to carefully clean and reapply the ointment to her injuries just as the royal physician had done earlier. Noticing the worried expressions on the maids’ faces as they went about their work, Eun Jung reassured them by saying, “Don’t be too concerned. These injuries look a lot worse than they really are. I’m sorry for making more work for everyone.” The maids were shocked by Eun Jung’s apology and quickly dropped to their knees before exclaiming in unison, “It’s our honor to serve your highness.” Finding herself still very unaccustomed to all of the formality within the Palace; Eun Jung quickly instructed the maids to stand and thought about how unfitting it was for them to treat her with such respect.

Once they had properly treated her injuries; Eun Jung’s maids escorted her back to her bedroom so that she could rest. Upon entering the bedroom, Eun Jung was delighted to see that dinner had already been served but was more focused on finding Prince Dae Hyun’s offerings. When she was unable to find the boxes that contained the offerings; Eun Jung turned her attention to Prince JiangSu and asked, “Where did you have them put the gifts?” Ignoring Eun Jung’s question; Prince JiangSu motioned for the maids to assist her over to the dining table, and dismissed them after they had helped her take her seat. Seeing that they were now alone, Eun Jung repeated her question by asking, “Where are Prince Dae Hyun’s offerings?” Placing his bowl of rice down on the table, Prince JiangSu replied nonchalantly, “I had one of the attendants get rid of those useless things.”

Eun Jung sat in disbelief upon hearing that Prince JiangSu had unilaterally decided to throw away their gifts. With her eyes intently focused on Prince JiangSu’s face; Eun Jung asked incredulously, “How can the gifts be useless?” Feeling himself becoming more frustrated by Eun Jung’s overt concern over Prince Dae Hyun’s offerings; Prince JiangSu stared at her before replying coolly, “They’re useless because I say so.” Having had enough of Prince JiangSu’s pompous attitude; Eun Jung carefully got up from her seat and staggered over towards their bed. Seeing that she was trying to maneuver around on her own; Prince JiangSu quickly made his way to Eun Jung’s side and grabbed a hold of her arm before asking, “Don’t you know that you need help to move around?” Pulling her arm away from his grasp, Eun Jung replied sarcastically, “Prince JiangSu, I don’t need any help. If I’m so useless that I can’t even make it to our bed on my own; I’m worried that you’ll decide to get rid of me too.”

Thinking that Eun Jung had completely lost her mind; Prince JiangSu demanded that she stop acting childish and asked her pointedly, “Do you need his gifts that badly?” Hearing the intense agitation in his voice; Eun Jung halted her steps and turned around to face him before replying, “I don’t care about those gifts at all, but I can’t understand why you’re acting so high and mighty.” With a loud scoff, Prince JiangSu declared, “I’m the Crowned Prince of Korea. I think that, in it of itself, entitles me to act as I please.” Disappointed to hear his declaration, Eun Jung observed calmly, “I guess you’re entitled to act this way, but that doesn’t mean that I have to like it. Since you were born with everything given to you; why can’t you stop to consider the people that have nothing?” Seeing Prince JiangSu’s vacant stare; Eun Jung continued to say, “Even if you think that those gifts are useless, there are people who might think that they are useful. I’m of the opinion that everything and everyone has worth in this world.”

Without bothering to respond to Eun Jung’s earnest speech; Prince JiangSu made his way past her and walked out of the room. Having never had Prince JiangSu actually walk out on her; Eun Jung began to worry that she had gone too far and slowly climbed into bed before covering herself completely with the blanket. Eun Jung had not been underneath the covers for very long before she heard the distinct sound of someone opening the door to the room. Despite hoping that it was Prince JiangSu at the door; Eun Jung dared not to remove the covers to find out who had just entered. Addressing the lump on the bed; Prince JiangSu ordered, “Come out from under there. I want to talk to you.” Although, she knew that Prince JiangSu would be upset if she did not come out from beneath the bed covers; Eun Jung wanted to avoid further confrontation and decided to stay put. Seeing that she was intent on defying him; Prince JiangSu grew agitated and proceeded to pull the covers away from her before ordering, “Go over there and finish your dinner.”

Taking note of her apprehension; Prince JiangSu decided to take matters into his own hands, and climbed into bed before proceeding to pick her up in his arms. Realizing that there was nothing she could do to stop Prince JiangSu from getting his way; Eun Jung remained motionless in his arms and allowed him to carry her over to the dining table. After Prince JiangSu placed her down on to the ground; Eun Jung inched over to her seat and looked over towards the dining table. Catching sight of Prince Dae Hyun’s offerings; Eun Jung turned to Prince JiangSu and asked, “Didn’t you already have someone get rid of those offerings?” To which, Prince JiangSu replied, “I did have someone get rid of them; but I just made someone else bring them back. As the crowned prince, I can make people to do whatever I want. But as your husband, I can’t even make you get out of bed.” Sensing that Prince JiangSu was not too upset with her; Eun Jung smiled and jokingly observed, “But eventually you were able to get me out of bed.” Happy to see Eun Jung’s bright smile reappear, Prince JiangSu wondered what other changes she would eventually evoke in him.
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Re:The Gilded Cage (In Progress) 14 years 9 months ago #5254

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another very good chapter to behold Jessicaaron. :)

Loving Prince JiangSu taking care of Eun Jung. He is just adorable and being a future King of Korea at that. :lol:

btw Eun Jung is getting her way with Prince JianSu. Hopefully he won't lose his patience, can't blame her sometimes 'coz she is always thinking maybe the presents could help another plus that she did not have much, of humble beginnings, just excited to get some goodies, also it because it came from Prince Dae Hyun. :ohmy:

Oh, can't have enough of our 2 lovable couple, their sweetness gets me flustered :blush:

Thanks again, enjoying your story very much. :) :)
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