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Re:Path of LOVE 14 years 7 months ago #12307

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kyonkichi78 wrote:

ne ne jaymie-chan, hontouni arigato for these updates

sorry for nt making any comments l8ly anyway, chp 9 jst shows hw attentive GS is when SH is wit HJ, kinda stalkerish abit , bt i like it! nicely done, hope to see mre of this

in chp 8, there's “you really don’t need reasons and explanations in order to move on because moving on is easy if you start accepting everything” Geun Suk said what u wrote here is really true n very profound bt yet, in reality, imo it's really hard to do, dont u think??! esp when there's death involved...

It's okay ren-chan..

yes,yes stalker..hihi

I thought so too.. you're right it's very difficult especially if you really love him very much..hehe

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Path of LOVE- Chapter 10 14 years 7 months ago #12310

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Chapter 10: With You

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After eating, they rode the Pharaoh’s fury together. They are all shouting because of the thrill. After that they decided to ride the Gyro Drop

“that?” Hongki said while looking at the Gyro Drop

“why?” Geun Suk asked

“you go on, I’ll just stay here” Hongki said

“why? Come on” Geun suk said

“No, you don’t want me to sent to the emergency room” Hongki said

‘then I’ll stay with Hongki, I can’t ride that too” Geun Young said

They decided to separate. Hongki and Geun young will go to the Magic Island, the outside theme Park while Geun Suk and Shin Hye will stay inside.

“so let’s meet here again after three hours” Geun Suk said

“okay” Geun Young said

“Finally, we’re alone” Geun Suk said

“eh?”

Geun Suk Smirked and “actually, I know Hongki will not take that ride” he smilingly said

“what? That’s so mean” Shin Hye commented

“I know. But atleast I’m with you” Geun Suk lovingly said
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Hongki and Geun Young take the Merry-Go-Round

“This is what I like” Hong ki said

“It’s a kiddie ride” Geun Young informed

“but it represent man’s elegance” Hongki said

“eh?’

“it’s like the Prince in a fairy tale, riding a horse” Hongki explained

Geun Young didn’t listen of what hongki just explained. Her eyes is pasted with Hongki’s seatbelt.

“Yah! You even put on your seatbelt?” Geun Young laughed

“why? Are you afraid to fall down” she continues laughing.

“why?”

“nothing. You really know how to make me laugh” Geun Young said between laughing

“that’s why I’m telling you, I am meant for you” he said
-

They are at the top of the Ferris Wheel. While waiting for the other people to go down,

“thanks for bringing me here” Shin Hye said

“it’s nothing” Geun suk said

“it’s my first time to go here, and it’s because of you” Shin Hye said

“then let’s make a remembrance” he shot his phone camera to her

“Yah! I’m not ready” she cutely complained

“it’s okay, nothing’s change, you’re still beautiful” he complimented

She blushed
-

“where do you still want to go?” Geun Suk asked

“let’s buy drinks first, my throat is drying” she said

“okay then, let’s go” he holds her hand and run.

She was shocked but she just went with the flow and laughingly run together with him.
-

Hongki and Geun Young rest for a while on the benches. Geun Young is massaging her feet, she’s tired of walking, and taking pictures but she’s enjoying very much.

“Yah! Why are you staring me?” Geun Young asked when she noticed that Hongki is looking at her.

“nothing” Hongki said

“Do you know that the habit of staring someone can lead to either of the two serious consequences” Geun Young said

“and what is it?” Hongki asked

“first, intense addiction, second, falling in love” Geun Young said

Hongki smiled and”then let me choose both” he said
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Shin Hye is enjoying sipping her drink. She’s smiling brightly and beautifully. Geun suk is just staring at her.

“Boah?” she asked wondering why he’s staring at her.

“I finally see that smile again” Geun Suk smiled

“why? I’m always smiling” she said

“yes, but not as bright and beautiful like that” he said

“You smile like this too. What’s the difference?” she asked

“the difference between our smile?” he asked

“you smile when you are happy. I smile because you are happy” he said

She blushed
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Geun Suk is already outside the store, while Shin Hye is still standing on her position. Geun Suk turned back and saw that Shin Hye is not following him.

“why?” he asked

“You made me run, I’m so tired” She complained

“so do you want to rest for a while” he said

She shook her head and “I want to go somewhere else” she said

“so what are we going to do now?” he asked

“Piggyride me” she cutely said

“boah?”

“why? You don’t want? Then I’ll stay here” she threathened

“You.. really… haishh, okay comeon” he chuckled

“really?”

“yes, come on” he said. He turned back and bend a little.

Shin Hye runs towards him and climb on his back.

“ah! You’re heavy” he complained

“really?” she asked

“No, I’m just kidding” he said

“Geez, I always forget my status whenever I’m with you” he added

“what status? Your playboy status?” she asked

“yes, it’s my first time to do this you know” he smilingly said

“really? Should I celebrate?” She sarcastically said

“If that’s what will make you happy” he said

She smiled and “Thank you” She whispered

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Re:Path of LOVE 14 years 7 months ago #12324

bianne ong OFFLINE Gold Star Posts: 872 Thank you received: 5	“Do you know that the habit of staring someone can lead to either of the two serious consequences - first, intense addiction, second, falling in love” “you smile when you are happy. I smile because you are happy” I totally loooooove these lines!!!! Thanks for updating jaymie! I may not always comment, but I read all of them chapters. And there's a musical twist to it, huh? Cool!
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Re:Path of LOVE 14 years 7 months ago #12342

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bianne ong wrote:

“Do you know that the habit of staring someone can lead to either of the two serious consequences - first, intense addiction, second, falling in love”

“you smile when you are happy. I smile because you are happy”

I totally loooooove these lines!!!!

Thanks for updating jaymie! I may not always comment, but I read all of them chapters. And there's a musical twist to it, huh?

Cool!

same goes for me too....thanks jaymie for the update

i cant help smiling while reading it.....

till the next

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Path of LOVE- Chapter 11 14 years 7 months ago #12375

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Chapter 11: My Favorite Candy

When they got inside. They start talking about what they did. Geun young told her about the merry go round thing while Shin Hye told her the piggy ride thing.

“You’re smiling” Geun Young teased

“I think you’re in love” she added

“Yah! I’m not in love; it’s just that lately he’s all I think about” Shin Hye defended.
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While on their way, Hongki ask Geun Suk if he can use his mobile phone because his is low battery. Geun Suk gave his phone.

“Yah! It’s Shin Hye” Hongki was surprised

“You made her picture your screen saver” Hongki added

“Yah! You’re going to use it or not?” Geun suk asked

“If not, give it back to me” he added

“No, I’ll use it” Hongki said

“yah, you like her do you?” he asked

Geun Suk didn’t answer him and just smiled.
-

“hello? Now? Sorry I can’t. Bye” Geun Suk hanged up his phone.

One of his girlfriends asked him for a date but he refused because he’s with Shin Hye.

“You can leave me here. I can get a taxi” Shin Hye suggested

“Do you think I’m going to do that? You’re more important than a date” He said

“I just don’t want to be a ..” she was interrupted by Geun suk

“never ever think that” He said
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“really? Yes! Yes! Yes!” Hongki shouted

“yah, stop it, it’s embarrassing” Geun Young said while smiling.

“I don’t care. I’m so happy” he said

After a month of courting, Geun Young finally accepted his proposal to be his girlfriend. Hong ki is so happy that he talks to every people who pass them and pointing Geun Young, saying she’s his girlfriend and finally she accepted his proposal.
-

Are you not being confused of their names? That maybe you called one of your girlfriends with another name?” Shin Hye asked

“Sometimes, but it’s okay because all of them knows that they are not only one” he explained

“really? What kind of girls are them? That they can accept it?” she said

“well, I think they just can’t resist my hotness” he kidded

“ow… big headed..” she smiled

“But don’t you think loving many people at the same time is like eating candies with different flavors? It’s fun because you get to taste all of them but once you are done and when they’re all gone can you tell which candy was the sweetest” Shin Hye said

“I know the feeling of being cheated, that I’m not the only one, and it hurts, so stop fooling around, stick with someone who makes you happy, get rid of the other candies and do yourself a favor, stay with your favorite one”she advised

Geun suk smiled and “ now tell me what am I going to do, if before I can put my favorite candy inside my mouth, it already fell down?” he asked

“huh?”

“you’re my favorite candy shin Hye, but it’s hard to get inside your heart because you already closed it” he said

“I love you Shin Hye, I love you not because we’re friends, I love you more than that” he added

Shin Hye was shocked of what she heard. She didn’t expect the confession of Geun Suk. She was just looking at him.

Geun suk also looked at her.

“Don’t think too much about it, I told you that not to love me back, but for you to know that you were loved” Geun suk said

“I don’t know what to say” her voice becomes husky

“You don’t need to say anything” he said

“but I’m telling you I’m not kidding anymore, I’m serious and I’m going to wait patiently until you decided to open your heart again” he seriously said
-

She remained silent on the way to their house. She’s looking at him every now and then to see his expression but he’s just smiling.

“Thank you” she said before stepping out of the car

“I hope what I said will not affect our friendship” he said

“ofcourse not, don’t worry” she still managed to smile.

He looked at her until she gets inside. Then “I’m going to wait. And when you finally become mine I swear to make you happy” he thought then he started his car.

When she got inside, she closed the door and leaned on it then she closed her eyes and touched her heart.

“you say I already close it? That’s what I thought until you said those three words” she whispered

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Re:Path of LOVE 14 years 7 months ago #12382

elhabe25 OFFLINE Senior Star Never give up Posts: 283 Thank you received: 3	Oww..jaymie..finally Sukkie admit his feeling..what Shin hye will gonna do?0_o i like this playboy here..despite of his player manner,he had attitude treating a wounded heart..oh and i love the candy thing,so deep ^^ thank you jaymie..and don't wanna push u..but cant wait for the next..heehee ^^
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Re:Path of LOVE 14 years 7 months ago #12386

ketobi OFFLINE Junior Star ShinGeun is LOVE Posts: 148 Thank you received: 2	Jayms your'e such a sweetie pie. I'm so lovng this chapter haha. although this FF is all about SH and GS. You managed to insert some HK and GY sweetness Though it's abit redundant i'll still THANK YOU Finally, GS was able to confessed his feelings. And SH is opening her heart. Can't wait for the chapter wohooo!
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Re:Path of LOVE 14 years 7 months ago #12397

sweetberry_xx OFFLINE Junior Star <3 Posts: 92	haha thats sweet =) im glad both of them have someone special! cant wait to see what happens with the ex comes back into the picture! doom doom doom! thunder sounds hahaha
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Re:Path of LOVE 14 years 7 months ago #12439

dita.savitri OFFLINE Senior Star Posts: 158 Thank you received: 1	aw, that's sweet sis, knowing that Geun suk love Shin hye but I hope not too soon Shin hye surrender her heart to geun suk She just broken-hearted, and we know Geun suk is a player... can not imagine what will happen when Hyun joong back because I think that will not easily forget someone we love, although he hurt us in the past especially when he comes back again in our lives
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Re:Path of LOVE 14 years 7 months ago #12547

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elhabe25 wrote:

Oww..jaymie..finally Sukkie admit his feeling..what Shin hye will gonna do?0_o

i like this playboy here..despite of his player manner,he had attitude treating a wounded heart..oh and i love the candy thing,so deep ^^

thank you jaymie..and don't wanna push u..but cant wait for the next..heehee ^^

well, he forgets that he's a playboy everytime he's with Shin hye..lol

Thanks again...

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